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Doctor Whooves - Rebirth Pt 11 by Edowaado Doctor Whooves - Rebirth Pt 11 by Edowaado
Doctor Who OST never seizes to amaze me, the end is soon…

A new part again! As an appreciation for all the donations that have been send, I'm working extra hard. This is my second night in a row without sleep, so I'll go catch some before I continue on the final part for this chapter. (I learned to make some great coffee too).

Iron Will stays to be my favorite character to write xD (And omg I'm so happy to draw something else then that metal spaceship)

See you guys with a new update on latest monday! (All-nighters here I come... again)

:bulletgreen: Doctor Whooves

Chapter 1:…
Chapter 2:…
Chapter 3:
Chapter 4:…
Chapter 5:…
Chapter 6:
Chapter 7:
Chapter 8:…
Chapter 9:
Chapter 10:…
Chapter 11
Part 1:…
Part 2:…
Part 3:…
Part 4:…
Part 5:…
Part 6:…
Part 7:…
Part 8:…
Part 9:…
Part 10:…
Part 11: -You Are Here-
Part 12:…

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This comic is drawn very well from start to finish. The art work has retained the style from the show itself but I admire your own little tweaks here and there. This comic so far is very detailed and it look like you put a lot of though, work and effort into the comic. I really enjoyed seeing all the loose ends tie up here with Derpy seeing Dinky and Lyra seeing Bon Bon. Both really tear jerking moments along with the sacrifice of the Doctor himself. That alone impacts the audience because you characterized him so we it's like we knew him on a personal level and with his sacrifice; it feels like we lost a close friend.

I do like how the comic ended on a slight humorous note.

Truly this was a very great comic. Keep it up!
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In the words of the 9th doctor:

"Just this once, everyone lives!"

I love how you focus on each character encountered and how this one moment is affecting them. It just sums up the entire adventure. It's sad and bittersweet cause they don't know that TARDIS saved the Doctor. However, this sadness is mixed with the humor that reminds us all that we have to move on even when it hurts.

Giving more originality points cause this was an original way to end. A regeneration saving the world? Mind-blowing. Plus, bonus points for Iron Will and the Johnny Bravo pony ending. Those characters separate your comic from the series and allow it to stand on its own.

Bravo. Well done.
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brad22474 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2016
It's okay, Derpy. I'll help you through this the best that I can. Winghugs for Derpy~ by AlwaysAWildcat  Th-th-thanks.
Animatorsnake Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016
The last panels are just hilarious
Gen-SilverChicken Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist



Johnny Bravo Emote 1
Johnny Bravo
Maldrete Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2015
Hahahaha. Iron Will gave that animal a scolding just like Fluttershy did to that dragon!
ryan4585 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015
The magical regeneration of everypony would have healed them of injures like iron wills broken wrist as well as the cyberpony-ness.
Edowaado Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like to think it turns them back to their original state rather than healing everything. Broken wrist being part of Iron Will's original state before being cyberfied.
ryan4585 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015
Perhaps, but the doctor who side of it would be that regeneration heals everything. Unless your trying to go with Lyra's magic deludes it making it less effective but it spreads to everypony.
Edowaado Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes, yes let's go with that.
ryan4585 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015
lol, really liked the comic tho.
gummy10020 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Student Writer
HyuugaHigure Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014
:iconninthdoctorplz::iconsaysplz:Just this once, everyone lives!:iconsaysendplz:

And am I a happy guy. I love these comics. Emotional roller coaster of Doctor Who with the magical 'heal everypony' from MLP.
I just hope poor Derpy is alright.
MattX125 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Student General Artist
Well maybe not Johnny, LOL!
HyuugaHigure Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014
I think I saw him in the epilogue. Beat up, but ok
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Edited Aug 25, 2014
:iconironwillplz::iconsaysplz:Iron Will don't take no s^!t from nopony!!!:iconsaysendplz:

:iconwarfstacheplz::iconsaysplz:That's my Minotaur! Huhuhuhuhuhuh.:iconsaysendplz:

(OoC: Though I think he learned that from Fluttershy, along with the last thing he said: "No means no!!")
DRSDavidSoft Featured By Owner Edited Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well I'm relieved seeing BonBon again! :D

You've definitely improved on the drawing and coloring style.
I don't have any more energy left to write a proper comment, but I want to thank you for this amazing comic.
Keep up the Good work! ;)
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
Wondering where those 2 would show up
StarfallenWolf Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
made me cry and then smile
Neverlyn Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This made me cry.. Poor Derpy.
lordmep Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Exasperated sigh of so much relief.
Kujiiro Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
"and then pain..."
I had an assumption, given the the apparatus within the upgrade chamber, and the notion that they will no longer feel pain afterwards, meant that all flesh (sans-brain) was to be removed and replaced with metal. I interpreted this as the most unimaginably painful experience any living creature ever could go through. Kind of like Dr. Manhattan's deconstruction.

Side-note: That spike wolf is adorable.
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Edited Aug 25, 2014
Dr. X: In the conversion, every organic part in the body is removed, with only the brain left, and then, when the suit of the Cyberman - or Cyberpony - is complete, the brain will be set in chemicals so that it could be sustained and act as the main system to operate the Cyberman. So, basically, yes, it is an extremely painful process. However, in the end, you will feel nothing at all.
Kujiiro Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Raphiefangirl Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
same johnny XD
TheShyAndTheStrong Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Student Writer
I burst out into laughter when Johnny shouted "I'm aliiiiive!"
Raphiefangirl Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
XD ikr
Blazemist Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aw crap
Johnny lived once again only to die </3

HiddenTourturedHeart Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
X'D Ohmyglarb... I can't see through the feels...
Doctorwholovesthe80s Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The last six panels are the BEST IN THE ENTIRE SERIES! Iron Will is one of the best characters forn the cartoon EVER!
Lex-the-Gallade Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WorldWalker128 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
Iron Will! Yes! And Johnny? Oh. Hi, Johnny.
OpalescentArtist Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I almost cried with Bonnie (Bon Bon).
kacript Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
Oh great, that Johny pony is back to.
TheCreatorofMonsters Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Iron Will is best background character
JETJK3 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
:iconfacepalmplz: Same old Jhonny.
BB-K Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
There goes Johnny. :lol:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Greenhatman Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013
Everyone comes back!  Including Bon Bon and Iron Will (never imagined I'd be so happy to see the big guy show up!)!  This is definitely one of my favorite pages of the entire story so far!
Darentez Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Iron Will rocked in this comic... Man, I'm glad everyone's ok... I didn't felt this happy to see someone was saved since Zelda Majora's Mask
TimeyWimeyWhooves Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013   General Artist
I actually forgot about that guy lol
catman1776 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
Oh poor Johnny Pony...
PortalDash Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Chrismilesprower Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Amazing. And sad. 
This is the happy ending I expected to see. =)
TheStaticStalker Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor Johnny.
UberHyperFangirl Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013
Iron Will! <3
Terrortheslayer Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Traveling-Artist Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Heh... Iron Will should have told that spike wolf no means no... :P
tigreanpony Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
That was great but what about the Doctor, Dinky, and Derpy they were a family
Katamariguy Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Hooray for unexpected ideal happy endings!

I'm saying that's a good thing!
iIsMe95 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
Poor Johnny...

Also, Iron Will tells off the spike wolf LIKE A BOSS!
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