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Doctor Whooves - Rebirth End by Edowaado Doctor Whooves - Rebirth End by Edowaado
A story ends the same way it began... with a wish. You better life a happy life with your daughter Derpy.

I do like how I got lots of comments of folks who were concerned with Foresight's well-being. Considering no one liked him in the beginning xD Also don't worry, those small pieces of the spaceship will all burn out before they even hit the ground.

Most of Foresight's monologue was actually written by a commenter I got on funnyjunk. I edited it only a slight bit, but it was so well done that I thought I couldn't let it go to waste. Hope you're reading this!

Gosh I'm tired but Wow what a ride! I bet you're wondering. Is this it? Is this really it? Yes, however. The main story is over. However! There will be an epilogue. It will only be a few parts, but we still can't leave this story until we find out what the deal is with Lyra and her knowledge of humans. Has all that happened here maybe have somekind of connection?

With that said thank you guys again a ton for the donations! I hope you guys enjoyed this story!

See you at the epilogue!

:bulletgreen: Doctor Whooves

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Chapter 3:
Chapter 4:…
Chapter 5:…
Chapter 6:
Chapter 7:
Chapter 8:…
Chapter 9:
Chapter 10:…
Chapter 11
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Part 3:…
Part 4:…
Part 5:…
Part 6:…
Part 7:…
Part 8:…
Part 9:…
Part 10:…
Part 11:…
Part 12: -You Are Here-


Foresight - I'm not your Hero - Comic Backstory…

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Considering this page alone, actually first off has it been a full on journey.
Now for the page it is fantastic. A great end to a new beginning for this series. The idea of having a re-telling of how it all started shifted into the end is perfect. I also adore Foresight's monologue, really does justice to the Doctor I do not know of. Also appreciate the simple symbols of the tarot cards, but you should know there is much more to them than meets the eye, death is one that this show alone is reflected upon. Anyways, good show!
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61 out of 62 deviants thought this was fair.

well then, i might as well write something

first VISION! now as always i think that the page generally looks brilliant. but lets be hard here and then see if others think im fair. the first thing is that when the debris is starting to get pulled into the planets gravity well and starts to burn in the second pic of the three i can't help but to notice that the last one seems to be out of sync with the others. might just be me but shouldn't that one be first? im saying this because it looks like it's the least on fire of the three.

moving on, the last thing i felt with the vision is that it took me a minute to understand that the picture of derpy in mailmare uniform seeing a shooting star was a flashback of when she saw the doctor come to equestria for the first time. while there is nothing wrong with it per se you might want to make some kind of indication that it is a flashback, maybe some mist arond the frame or something like that, im just throwing suggestions.

all in all though? vision is a clear 4/5 (for me) and that is only if the first one was misplaced otherwise a 4,5/5.

now, originality.

hmmm... 4/5 NEXT!!

just kidding, about the next part at least. well i can surely say that this shit right here is about as original as you can get from a doctor who crossover. doctor saves the day, the semi-antagonist decides on a clean slate and to help ponies with the powers he has. while this in itself might not sound original i deem that the execution of the concept is what makes this worthy of a round of applause. still, it IS a kind of classic end it still isn't entirely original that is needed for the 5/5


again, not much needs to be said, the art you deliver is definitely first class considering what you are using. nothing more to see here folks, 5/5, move on.

now for the last part FEELS *cough* i mean impact.

im gonna say that this page had one hell of a impact on me. it creates that good kind of ache that tells you that while everything is a bit sad and down it's still gonna work out. the guy who had been cursed with a two-sided blade is inspired to take a second look on life. the companion is safe with her family and you top that off with a solid philosophical view of the loneliness of the traveler who is searching for a place to rest. brilliant, very much so.

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stardusk4 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
I looked at all the pages for 7 hours!! It was so good I wanted to cry. Judy - (Crying) Icon Hatsune Miku-07 (Cries) 
XanderTheNightmare Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I read the whole thing, I loved it!!! Amazing artwork as well :D 
Edowaado Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, so glad you enjoyed it!
Max-Maximus Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2016
It was a great story! Thanks a lot for it.
Animatorsnake Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016
Chockit Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2015
For the ending, my mum was playing a really sad song so know I'm absolutely balling my eyes out
It's such a wonderful comic
GoldenBurningPony Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Cry run 
BlizzardSwirl-MLP Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015
wow during the last few pages of the chapter i won't lie i really did cry i hadn't cried in a story in awhile actually great job on the story amazing :)
Scarred-Animal Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This comic was AMAZING!! You can really feel how they all feel and honestly, you don't see a lot of comics like this one.
xXBigmacxCheerleeXx Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015
i love it i read it all in one day its amazingftu toy chica icon RUN MEDIC! RUN MEDIC!   Baguette Intensifies Nick Wilde chat icon RUN SNIPER! RUN SNIPER! Vinyl Scratch Bass Drop Icon Gilda (haha) plz Pinkie pie (derping) plz   F2U icon derpy breaks the fourth wall icon Luna Tongue icon Cute Cuddles Icon pinkie pie (whisking cake) plz Francesco-icon [YCH]Tooka-Rock-Icon meh meh Pinkie pie (toothless gear) plz 
NecromancerKing85 Featured By Owner May 25, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
best comic I read Great story very fine drawings all in all an AWESOME comic
Edowaado Featured By Owner May 25, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for your kind feedback, so glad you enjoyed the read. I hope you'll watch me for future work to come.
MoonLight20011123 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015  Student Digital Artist
*trys to hold in tears*
*gives up*
Chrismilesprower Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2015  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
XxSamanthaShyxX Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015  Student Artist I want more Feeling c': Is this gonna be the end?
Edowaado Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you. Yes this is the end. However if you want more feelings I have made a short comic (10) parts called

I Care: Link

Or if you're only looking for pony related comics

Foresight - I'm Not Your Hero - Link

Doctor Whooves - Christmas Special - Link

Dan vs Bronies - Link (Not completed yet)
XxSamanthaShyxX Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015  Student Artist
Yay, Tyvm <3 :)
Edowaado Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for your kind comments ^^
NinjaBrony817 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Student General Artist
:iconfacedeskforeverplz: NOW I'M CRYING
AccountNew Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015
The omniscience of the authors puppet, the emotions of the protagonist... such things are food for thought. Having read the epilogue, I thought I'd just nestle my comment right here. Admittedly, I like this scene a lot. This was a beautiful piece of art, felicitations.
Edowaado Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much, I appreciate your kind comment ^^
VengeanceOfFlames Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
These much emotions made me cry ... Well done sir, nothing before this could ever do it ... well done ...
Edowaado Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a lot for your kind words ^^ Hope after you check out the epilogue you'll follow my humorous Dan vs comic :)
VengeanceOfFlames Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I sure have/will do. :)
VinnyMartello Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLY SHIT. Please excuse my profanity. I apologize. I've become both cognitively and emotionally invested in this story and I'm absolutely impressed. I'd write a critique but I doubt I'd do you any justice.

From page one to now your art has exploded with brilliance. Your're a storyteller mate. And a damn good one. Thanks for creating this spectacular series. I hope you do more in the future. Here's a thought - if you have thousands of watchers, maybe they'll all chip in a dollar a month. (I'd be happy to toss a coin in the coffer). You can live off a few thousand a month no problem. Keep making comics! Hahaha... Thank you for writing a story definitely worth reading. I hope to achieve such a caliber of creativity someday. But for now, I'm just writing songs...
ANiceCupOfCocoa Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Dr. Whooves La Clapping Pony Icon - Lyra Heartstrings Derpy Clapping Icon Clapping Pony Icon - Dinky Hooves Clapping Pony Icon - Sweetie Drops/BonBon Clapping Pony Icon - Fluttershy Clapping Pony Icon - Princess Luna Clapping Pony Icon - Rarity Clapping Pony Icon - Applejack Clapping Pony Icon - Nightmare Moon Clapping Pony Icon - Rainbow Dash Clapping Pony Icon - Pinkie Pie Clapping Pony Icon - Vinyl Scratch Clapping Pony Icon - Princess Cadence Clapping Pony Icon - Changeling Clapping Pony Icon - Princess Celestia Clapping Pony Icon - Trixie Clapping Pony Icon - Queen Chrysalis Clapping Pony Icon - Twilight Sparkle Clapping Pony Icon - Applebloom Clapping Pony Icon - Spitfire Clapping Pony Icon - Soarin Clapping Pony Icon - Lightning Dust Clapping Pony Icon - Scootaloo Clapping Pony Icon - Thunderlane Clapping Pony Icon - Babs Seed Clapping Pony Icon - Sweetie Belle Clapping Pony Icon - Braeburn Clapping Pony Icon - Shining Armor Clapping Pony Icon - Minuette Clapping Pony Icon - Rainbow Blitz Clapping Pony Icon - Sunset Shimmer Clapping Pony Icon - Bubble Berry Clapping Pony Icon - Season Four Twilight Clapping Pony Icon - Butterscotch Clapping Pony Icon - Diamond Tiara Clapping Pony Icon - Elusive Clapping Pony Icon - Dusk Shine Clapping Pony Icon - Octavia Clapping Pony Icon - Apple Jack Clapping Pony Icon - Applejewel Clapping Pony Icon - Maud Cheese Sandwich clapping Clapping Pony Icon - Blinky 
All the ponies clap for u (including me Clapping )  

HyuugaHigure Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014
I'm with you :iconclappingplz:
ANiceCupOfCocoa Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Epic clap 
FanaticPanda Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Clapclap  Bravo :D Loved this comic, So much action 'v'
brandonmp98 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
loved this whole story, got really into it. just brilliant, absolutely brilliant!
chrismaticfool Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
Wow, this comic is wonderfully written. The ending is just perfecct.
shay123654 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014
Can you make a continueation for this comic? PLEASE? like the new doctor is coming back to ponyville and derpy finds him and makes him remember his past life or something like that? PLEAAAASSSSEEEEEE!
turkey18eye Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014
he knows who he is
Rainbowstarspower Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
make more please
cwonadoonoo Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG SHOCK. Bwaaaaaa! That was so great!!!!!!!
segamarvel Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
Don't get me wrong I LOVED this story but... where the Hell were the almighty princesses during this time? Or the Elements of harmony?
Derp-Puppy Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
or maybe they went on a vacation?! XD lol
segamarvel Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014
Darn!.... Didn't think of that.
StreamSecret Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
well, maybe they were all captured as well, and/or the princesses were trying to defend themselves and canterlot until the cyber ponies went away
segamarvel Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014
Don't worry. Edowaado already explained it to me.
Edowaado Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
We always try to imagine what the background ponies do offscreen. This time it's reversed.

123cupcake Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
this time you can allow your mind to run wild about what the mane 6 and the princesses are doing about this.

possibly nothing.
segamarvel Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
Thank you. I hope I didn't sound rude earlier.
Kujiiro Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
My God this is a beautiful comic, and an exciting ride.
Whisperofleafs Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer

Awe Some NESSS

wolfpaw-z Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Student Artist
omfg i stayed up all night to read this and i dont regret a think this is just amazing on so many levels you are just amazing, amazing i tell you ;u;
Edowaado Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So happy to hear you enjoyed it! Hope you'll check out the epilogue in the artist description :icondoctorthumbsupplz:
wolfpaw-z Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Student Artist
i so am >w<
bellak33 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
La la la la I LOVED THESE!
abunchofbabyducks01 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I loved it!!!! I now have a major crush on Foresight! I liked him in the beginning and them hated him when he betrayed the Doctor. But when you see what happened to him, I started to love him all over again!
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