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Yeah, I'm surprised how many of you got it right with the headbutt.

:iconcryforeverplz: Wow! Finally done! I can't believe it! Took me over a year and a half to get this done, but now the moment is finally here! I've had this scene planned in my head ever since chapter 1. It's funny how a joke page could end up to such a big project. Originally I just wanted to show the potential between Lyra and Whooves. But I said if I got more than 1000 views under 24 hours on my first page I would continue on it. So yeah, here we are. Done. I'm happy to have contributed one of the longest MLP comics made so far. Over 500 colored pages.

I think what I'm most proud of is... I think it's how I wrote Iron Will's character not gonna lie. He was my favorite throughout the whole comic.

Will there be more to come? No... Well... Maybe. If anyone feels like picking up the story from here, feel free. But for now, I have another project in mind I want to work on that I think you guys will enjoy. 

Thank you all for reading, your comments, your faves, and most of all, your support. You're all wonderful people. Thank you.

Let's end it with this a song I find very suiting to end all this, It's been fun but now I've got to go, hope we can do this again, it's been a ride! www.youtube.com/watch?v=xFrFc1…

See You All Next Year!

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:bulletgreen: Doctor Whooves

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Chapter 4: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Ri…
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Chapter 10: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Ne…
Chapter 11: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Re…

Epilogue

Part 1: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Do…
Part 7: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Do…
Part 8: -You Are Here-

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:bulletblue: Foresight - I'm Not Your Hero -


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:iconashezth:
This comic has been one of the most fun things I've followed since Moonstuck. Its twists and turns, the inevitable cliffhanger, all kind of drew me into the story more. And I think we're all a little better off having read them as they were being drawn, than those that will follow and read it all in one go.

Good sir, I rate you a 5 in vision, because it was a joy to see you tell this story. Your mind had a vision and you followed it through to the end, which many people are unable to do. I did decide to dock you a star and a half in the originality portion due to it simply being a crossover, a marvelous crossover, but hold your ponies I'm not done yet. A 5 needed to be placed into technique not just for the art style that we saw you develop along the way, but the way the scenes unfolded, the change in how the characters grew, showed their ability to adapt, change, show emotion, or lack thereof, form a bond to help each other in crisis. It was all blended together so nicely, I double diamond dog dare anyone to do a better job because I know I couldn't. And lastly my 4.5 for Impact. Anything that can hold my attention, as well as I'm sure many others, for roughly 20 months should surely be held as some form of Impact. But more to the point I've seen plenty of other aspiring artists and authors giving credit to you for inspiring them to do more than just read a story, you and this comic have made an Impact on the way people are living their lives now and the stories they're telling.

So thank you, Edowaado, for your dedication to your art, your fans, your watchers, and your friends. Thank you.
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Dear mr Edowaado, your comic caught my interest from the 1st page of it I saw.
It combined two great shows, and probably got groups of the shows together-becouse of this art.
I am happy to say that this comic is so far the best fanfic of Doctor Whooves,I've seen. The vison seems , seemed and will seem (to me ) like a good movie opening.
The art, the storyline and general impact of it all is bringing me back a lot of the good old Doctor Who feels.
Keep up the awesome work and thank you for making this great, gripping story
~Tavia/WolvesAndAngels66
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sunblaze32 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2017
Christ... was this really 4 years ago? Man, really lost track of time.

...Damnit, i'm sad now.
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BadgerHood12 Featured By Owner Edited Nov 13, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Things can not truly end, if it was there, it's there forever. Stuck in our little thing called time. Events can be perceived as minor or major. Either way, they are still important nonetheless. It can't happen if it didn't have meaning, yet it technically can happen without meaning. Take something incomprehensible and try to make it understandable. Does it still not make sense? Then you have a sense of reality. Did it make sense? Does it really? Did it make less sense when you tried to make sense of it? Is what you are reading right now making sense? Yes or no? Does it make sense that you chose to read this random comment because it's long? Or is it because you just like to read random comments of something that seems irrelevant to the thing this page is about. Is this relevant? Did it make sense I decided to post this weird comment? Why did it switch topics quickly? Are you getting confused? Are you understanding this? Why does it make sense? Why am I asking so many questions? Am I asking just one? What is your answer? Do you really have to answer?

Did you read this all this or just skipped to this?

You have learned something by reading this.

Did you really?

Are you still lost?

Find everything and nothing.

Can you do that?
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Sparksol Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2017
Lost track of this one back somewhen in chapter 10 when I lost a hard drive and all my bookmarks and so on, and finally found it again. Excellent ending for the main chapters, and the epilogue does nicely wrap everything up! (Even if it is just a bit iffy logically.)

Also, I'm very glad this got an ending to its story, there's way too many unfinished ones out there.
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TheTotem Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
i would like to read a sequel of this with the doctor and lyra on adventures
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Vupsi12345 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2017
I don't get it. What's up with the round things? o_O
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:iconedowaado:
Edowaado Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for reading my story vupsi ^^ !
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:iconvupsi12345:
Vupsi12345 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2017
You're welcome. It was absolutely amazing! :D
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Edowaado Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Tak skal du ha'!
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Vupsi12345 Featured By Owner Edited Jun 28, 2017
Hvordan vidste du at jeg også var Dansk? O_o EDIT: Oh. Jeg havde ikke engang opdaget at min profil siger "Denmark" xD
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DaRealPowerNarth Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2017
I'm crying, CRYING, I-I JUST CANT BELIEVE IT! 
I-ITS OVER, MY GOSH, I KNOW THERE NEED TO BE AN END, BUT THIS, MY GOD, I-I-I CANT BELIEVE IT! I AM LITTERLY CRYING OUT LOUD, AND SERIOUSLY, MY ROOM IS ALMOST AT MY BED, LITTERLY REAL!!Rainbow Dash (cry) plz MLP Emote Twilight Sparkle Cry Sad Rarity (cry) plz Emotipony Cry :iconlyracryingplz: Pinkie is crying MLP Rainbow Dash (Sad) Plz :iconpinkamenacryingplz: :iconsweetiebellecryingplz: Rarity Crying Plz Rarity reaction to Gala naked icon MLP Emote Shining Armor Crying 
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PrincesaSpiritWild Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beatiful!Dr. Whooves La Dr. Whooves La Dr. Whooves La Dr. Whooves La Dr. Whooves La Dr. Whooves La Chibi Lyra Icon Doctor Whooves Icon 2 Doctor Whooves Icon 3 Awesome Face, Doctor Style 
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RealNexus Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2016
me -> PLS KISS KISS KISS


 And then headbutt... *kms*
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barcakiero Featured By Owner Edited Oct 30, 2016
me: DON'T YOU DARE TO KISS, YOU HAVE DERPY YOU-
oh....... that's better ^^
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Lyokoheros Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Right, I 120% agree. 
And why Doctor must be so stupid to leave Derpy... and this whole logical error with Lyra getting know about humans from herself... meh it really need an alternative ending. 
Even if it is one of best MLP stories ever created.
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barcakiero Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2017
he leave derpy because he is no longer himself anymore, and it's more the doc who did that with the headbutt thing, and timeline logic.... (seriously, the artist used it well)
but i think the dox should write a letter to derpy, at least a letter
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Lyokoheros Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Letter would be better than nothing, but still worse than leaving her. 
Even if he now has other skills, other character, appearance and all this is still the same person. Changed but the same(as much as i understand regeneration, and I'm based only on that comic, the series Doctor Who i just started to watch). 
And no matter how different he is now, he still remember all what happened in previous regenerations... and I'm even more than 120% sure, that nor Derpy either Dinky would care how he change and would love him such as he is. Dinky as her father(in one of additional comic she nearly named him "dad"!) and Derpy as... well future husband? I really can imagine this bothe gettine married. 
And I'm sure that deep inside he still love Derpy.
Especially that we saw that he still likes Lyra. 
And even if normally regeneration could erase such a relationship(well, true love is much more than just a feeling, and I think it was true love), this happened in Equestria. 
And in Equestria as we know such things as friendship or love(actually considering that there are 4 types of love this disinction make no sense, but that's beside the poind) have big importance in Equestrian magic, are even a part of it. And surely equestrian magic exist also independ from ponies(we could show it in series quite often, it just need to look carefully enough), and even if not earth ponies aren't without magic...
What is my point? My point is that equestrian magic could interfere with regeneration process - because of Doctor's love toward Derpy and Dinky - and that would make possible to stay with Derpy... or well to take her with him on his travels through time and space. Both Derpy and Dinky would want that. 

About headbutt - I don't have problem with headbutts... that's strange but well fully acceptable. Is not unlogical, or anything. 
Timeline logic... or rather lack of it is the problem. I know such logical errors are very popular in orginal series(I mean Doctow Who, I heard it from friend of mine who is fan of Doctor Who), and actually the only explanation of them is "it's not unlogical, You just don't understand, and Wibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey"(what's extremely lame in my opinion. I know that there are very little stories which have time travelling and do it without logical errors... but there are such stories!(I know 3.) So it's not impossible). 
Fortunately Edowaado doesn't do anything like this... till the epilogue.
Till epilogue Edowaado really us it well, because... well he didn't use it, but in the end he do really unnecessery logical error. And that's bother me the most about this - it was completely unecessery. There could be thousands better way of explaining Lyras interest in humans... well actually even no explanation would be better!

Don't take me wrong. I really admire Edowadoo's work. That's great comic and great story. One of best crossovers I've ever seen perfect example of how to do crossovers. And definitely on of the best MLP stories I ever read(together with "Past Sins" and "Si Deus nobiscum")... 
Actually this how perfect was this whole story is one of the reasons why this logical error bother me so much. It's something what could pass in some low class story, but not in story of the highest class. 
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barcakiero Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2017
exactly
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jakxfreddy Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO IT CANT END HERE
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PerryPinkiePotter Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2016
I am crying my freaking eyes out!
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TexasBean Featured By Owner May 31, 2016  Professional General Artist
I LOVED this!! Squee! Twilight (Squee) Plz  read it all in one sitting  genesislovesyou2plz - totally worth it. Honestly got teary eyed at parts Pikachu Crying Plz  11/10 would read again 
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Edowaado Featured By Owner May 31, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for readin Texasbean! Hope you'll follow me for more comics to come!
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TexasBean Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Professional General Artist
Yato (At your service) [V1] Yep! Sure thing - looking forward to the next comic you have in mind
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PatTheBaker1 Featured By Owner May 25, 2016
Loved it! Great work!
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CMC--Scootaloo Featured By Owner May 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow..... That tribute to the first page almost made me tear up again.
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ShujiWakahisaa Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2016  Student General Artist
BEST COMIC OF DOCTOR WHO EVER!!!!!
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Edowaado Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for reading you Shuji! Really happy to have read all your comments x)
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applegeek83 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2016
As both a Brony and a Whovian, I must say....FANTASTIC!  I feel like you perfectly captured and merged both worlds in the best ways possible.  Your imagination is phenomenal!  I know this strip is a few years old, and I'm sure you've moved on, but I would love to see you do another story like this some day.  The very first thing that comes to mind is the newly regenerated Doctor Whooves traveling back to before the founding of Equestria, when Star Swirl the Bearded lived, and seeing those two get into it.  We know Star Swirl experimented a LOT with time travel spells, so imagine if Doctor Whooves helped him out with some of that.  ;)
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BinxDiAngelo Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
make another!
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PrincessLoliPopsicle Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
This was the most epic story ever. I spent hours reading it. YOU ARE AMAZING.
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FoxWriter2 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2016
I loved this whole comic,awesome job!
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connoredmo Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2016
I LOVED THIS SOOOO MUCH PLZ MAKE MORE AND PLZ BRING BACK DERPY PLZPLZPLZPZLPZLPZLPZLZLZP
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connoredmo Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2016
This comic has been one of the best i have ever read plz make anouth continuation plzplzplz
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BigKatana Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2016
Great story! I don't usually watch Doctor Who, but I was still intrigued. The comics were well drawn. Thank you!
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wolfpaws72 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg, that was AWESOME. Such amazing writing- I wish I could write like this! SqueeEE! Thank you for making this- I loved it! :D (Big Grin)  (But they should've kissed XD)
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Edowaado Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aaah so happy you enjoyed it, thanks for reading, and thanks for the watch. Really appreciate your readership ^^
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wolfpaws72 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
You're most welcome ^^ 
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redhidra Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2016
10/10 make m3 cry :,v
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:iconkillerkenny42:
What is the song that edowaado put?
Great job!!!
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Saraswati3 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Great job!
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NighthelmCa Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
I am just now coming across and finishing this comic series and I must say that this is one of those most fantastic stories I have ever read! 

I must say, I very much appreciate you going through all the trouble to make this and to do it so well. The characters, the story, the emotion, the art... it is so great! You have captured the personalities of the Doctor, Lyra, Bon-Bon, and Derpy and made me grow to love Foresight and Iron Will as well.

Thank you so much for making this! :)
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Crizadewolf Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG THIS WAS AMAZING!!!
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jninja15 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Good grief all of this is some excellent writting!
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PhotoshopExpress Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This comic was amazing, I have been reading it for the past 4 hours and it's now 1:30 am. I might have to get up early but this read was totally worth it. The time traveling there at the end, blew my mind. Throughout the comic though I feel like I got a grasp on the messages. We just got to live life in the present, and what we do in the present is who we are, not what our past is. The Iron Will quote on truth was great. After reading this comic I feel like I have to watch the actual Doctor Who so thanks. This is probably the best comic I have read on deviantart. 10/10
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Karyu-no-Kiba Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
 I'm pretty sure I already commented on this, but hell, I just thought of this and I figured you'd enjoy it.

 Ahem...

 Celestia smiled as she watched the tidal wave of oh so familiar energy race over Equestria. As it washed over her, she felt her very cells revitalizing themselves. Cyberponies that had once been members of her court shrieked as the golden energy returned them to their natural forms. Friends, employees... even her sister... once the energy finally vanished, all who had been changed collapsed and passed out.

 She didn't need to ask what had happened. She knew. He told her about this once. It was a fixed point after all. The Doctor's very first pony Regeneration. He warned her not to get the Elements involved. Time had already worked out everything. The Elements were unnecessary.

 "Well old friend, you've done it again. Though, I suppose, this time I can't say again" She smiled at her own little joke and went about moving everypony into more comfortable positions.

 And as ponies slumbered in her castle to recover, she lost herself to memories of a time long gone by, before Nightmare Moon, before Discord, before Sombra... Before Equestria. The Doctor and his TARDiS. The Oncoming Storm. The Madpony with a Box. And the Balance Twins that traveled with him, trying desperately to escape the responsibility they were not ready to bear.

 "Run, Doctor. And never stop"
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NoradTwo Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016
I had no idea this would be so good.
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:iconedowaado:
Edowaado Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks very much for your readership! Hope you will watch me for future comics ^^
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Animatorsnake Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016
These kind of stories I love, they are complete loops and anything can happen... will there be a sequel?
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:iconedowaado:
Edowaado Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for reading! And thank you so much for all the lovely comics.

unfortunately no, but I did take the time to make a single spin-off page :) Link

You can also find prequal comics to this story here and here

Christmas Comic

Foresight's Past

Aaaand, right now I still need to get back to my Dan vs Bronies comic Link

Lots of stuff!
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Animatorsnake Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016
Good to know, keep up the excellent work! *thumbs up*
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