Yeah, I'm surprised how many of you got it right with the headbutt.
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Part 8: -You Are Here-
Good sir, I rate you a 5 in vision, because it was a joy to see you tell this story. Your mind had a vision and you followed it through to the end, which many people are unable to do. I did decide to dock you a star and a half in the originality portion due to it simply being a crossover, a marvelous crossover, but hold your ponies I'm not done yet. A 5 needed to be placed into technique not just for the art style that we saw you develop along the way, but the way the scenes unfolded, the change in how the characters grew, showed their ability to adapt, change, show emotion, or lack thereof, form a bond to help each other in crisis. It was all blended together so nicely, I double diamond dog dare anyone to do a better job because I know I couldn't. And lastly my 4.5 for Impact. Anything that can hold my attention, as well as I'm sure many others, for roughly 20 months should surely be held as some form of Impact. But more to the point I've seen plenty of other aspiring artists and authors giving credit to you for inspiring them to do more than just read a story, you and this comic have made an Impact on the way people are living their lives now and the stories they're telling.
So thank you, Edowaado, for your dedication to your art, your fans, your watchers, and your friends. Thank you.
It combined two great shows, and probably got groups of the shows together-becouse of this art.
I am happy to say that this comic is so far the best fanfic of Doctor Whooves,I've seen. The vison seems , seemed and will seem (to me ) like a good movie opening.
The art, the storyline and general impact of it all is bringing me back a lot of the good old Doctor Who feels.
Keep up the awesome work and thank you for making this great, gripping story
...Damnit, i'm sad now.
Did you read this all this or just skipped to this?
You have learned something by reading this.
Did you really?
Are you still lost?
Find everything and nothing.
Can you do that?
Also, I'm very glad this got an ending to its story, there's way too many unfinished ones out there.
And then headbutt... *kms*
oh....... that's better ^^
And why Doctor must be so stupid to leave Derpy... and this whole logical error with Lyra getting know about humans from herself... meh it really need an alternative ending.
Even if it is one of best MLP stories ever created.
but i think the dox should write a letter to derpy, at least a letter
Even if he now has other skills, other character, appearance and all this is still the same person. Changed but the same(as much as i understand regeneration, and I'm based only on that comic, the series Doctor Who i just started to watch).
And no matter how different he is now, he still remember all what happened in previous regenerations... and I'm even more than 120% sure, that nor Derpy either Dinky would care how he change and would love him such as he is. Dinky as her father(in one of additional comic she nearly named him "dad"!) and Derpy as... well future husband? I really can imagine this bothe gettine married.
And I'm sure that deep inside he still love Derpy.
Especially that we saw that he still likes Lyra.
And even if normally regeneration could erase such a relationship(well, true love is much more than just a feeling, and I think it was true love), this happened in Equestria.
And in Equestria as we know such things as friendship or love(actually considering that there are 4 types of love this disinction make no sense, but that's beside the poind) have big importance in Equestrian magic, are even a part of it. And surely equestrian magic exist also independ from ponies(we could show it in series quite often, it just need to look carefully enough), and even if not earth ponies aren't without magic...
What is my point? My point is that equestrian magic could interfere with regeneration process - because of Doctor's love toward Derpy and Dinky - and that would make possible to stay with Derpy... or well to take her with him on his travels through time and space. Both Derpy and Dinky would want that.
About headbutt - I don't have problem with headbutts... that's strange but well fully acceptable. Is not unlogical, or anything.
Timeline logic... or rather lack of it is the problem. I know such logical errors are very popular in orginal series(I mean Doctow Who, I heard it from friend of mine who is fan of Doctor Who), and actually the only explanation of them is "it's not unlogical, You just don't understand, and Wibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey"(what's extremely lame in my opinion. I know that there are very little stories which have time travelling and do it without logical errors... but there are such stories!(I know 3.) So it's not impossible).
Fortunately Edowaado doesn't do anything like this... till the epilogue.
Till epilogue Edowaado really us it well, because... well he didn't use it, but in the end he do really unnecessery logical error. And that's bother me the most about this - it was completely unecessery. There could be thousands better way of explaining Lyras interest in humans... well actually even no explanation would be better!
Don't take me wrong. I really admire Edowadoo's work. That's great comic and great story. One of best crossovers I've ever seen perfect example of how to do crossovers. And definitely on of the best MLP stories I ever read(together with "Past Sins" and "Si Deus nobiscum")...
Actually this how perfect was this whole story is one of the reasons why this logical error bother me so much. It's something what could pass in some low class story, but not in story of the highest class.
I must say, I very much appreciate you going through all the trouble to make this and to do it so well. The characters, the story, the emotion, the art... it is so great! You have captured the personalities of the Doctor, Lyra, Bon-Bon, and Derpy and made me grow to love Foresight and Iron Will as well.
Thank you so much for making this!
Celestia smiled as she watched the tidal wave of oh so familiar energy race over Equestria. As it washed over her, she felt her very cells revitalizing themselves. Cyberponies that had once been members of her court shrieked as the golden energy returned them to their natural forms. Friends, employees... even her sister... once the energy finally vanished, all who had been changed collapsed and passed out.
She didn't need to ask what had happened. She knew. He told her about this once. It was a fixed point after all. The Doctor's very first pony Regeneration. He warned her not to get the Elements involved. Time had already worked out everything. The Elements were unnecessary.
"Well old friend, you've done it again. Though, I suppose, this time I can't say again" She smiled at her own little joke and went about moving everypony into more comfortable positions.
And as ponies slumbered in her castle to recover, she lost herself to memories of a time long gone by, before Nightmare Moon, before Discord, before Sombra... Before Equestria. The Doctor and his TARDiS. The Oncoming Storm. The Madpony with a Box. And the Balance Twins that traveled with him, trying desperately to escape the responsibility they were not ready to bear.
"Run, Doctor. And never stop"
unfortunately no, but I did take the time to make a single spin-off page Link
You can also find prequal comics to this story here and here
Aaaand, right now I still need to get back to my Dan vs Bronies comic Link
Lots of stuff!