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Doctor Whooves - End Game Pt 8 ''End'' by Edowaado Doctor Whooves - End Game Pt 8 ''End'' by Edowaado
I've been waiting so long to get to this very point! I hope you all enjoyed reading this chapter as much as I did making it.
I've decided to raise the bar with this comic, but to do that I need to become a better person. I want to become better at drawing, become better at english, write the story better than I have until now, go out and get some air with my rollerblades, and all while I still have to focus on the final semester for my school.

So I've decided to at least take a two weeks break to learn how to use photoshop which I've received recently, and train pony antomy and lineless backgrounds as well.

:bulletgreen: Doctor Whooves

Chapter 1:…
Chapter 2:…
Chapter 3:
Chapter 4:…
Chapter 5:…
Chapter 6:
Chapter 7:
Chapter 8:…

Chapter 9:
Part 1:
Part 2:
Part 3:
Part 4:
Part 5:
Part 6:…
Part 7:…
Part 8: -You Are Here-

Chapter 10:…
Chapter 11:…
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First let me say that you are an excellent artist with incredible stamina. I've followed others that put out half the amount of work you do and in twice the time. The sheer volume of art you produce is staggering by comparison. Not only for it's quality, but it's quantity as well.
I am a recent watcher and read through pretty much everything on a weekend and at the end of each chapter I grew more and more enthralled with the story and the characters you portrayed. You've captured the essence of both the 10th Doctor and MLP in a way that is not only creative, but doesn't break the rules of two VERY different worlds.
If I had any complaints it's that you have the occasional spelling error, but it's not uber distracting for me. All in all it's a great series and I look forward to seeing how Lyra and Doctor get out of this mess.
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I've been following you since the first chapter, and I can't imagine the amount of effort you put into this. The storyline has a very Doctor Who feel to it.

The only thing I'm not much of a fan of is the dialogue. There are parts in which it's obvious what you're trying to say... but things occasionally get lost in translation. If you could fix the run-on sentences, and avoid using more than two "and's" in a sentence, it would really help keep the reader in the story.

Perhaps you could get someone to help polish your transcripts. (I'd even volunteer) You're a great artist, and I love what you have done with the story. I just think you could improve on the character speech.
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Lyokoheros Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I found this series last saturday. Then I started to read it with my younger brother(well to be more precise I simultaneously dubbed it for him, because he's not so good at English, but on the other hoof this let me to more get into the story and fell them even better... that's great way of reading) and we are both really excited about it. Idea of conecting this two conceptions: Doctor Hooves as Doktor and loving humans Lyra was just brilliant, the same like the whole story, including backstories of other characters. 
And every page make us both want to read next... 
Maybe i didn't watched "Doctor Who" series before(but still I know some facts about the Doctor, because my friend is fan of this series) but this make me really want to watch it. 

And also have a question to You... I think about translating this great comic into Polish whould You agree for that? And perhaps You could give me the pages in version without text so I could just fill appropriate places with translated text? Then i can publish it myself(of course with full credits and links to the orginal!) or send it to You, and you'll publish - it's up to You which way You choose. 
Edowaado Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hello Lyoko

I'm thrilled to hear how much you enjoyed my graphic story of Doctor Whooves. Even though it's a long time I've finished it, I'm alwats happy to see new readers who took their time to read it.

Your offer for translating is also very much flattering. I don't have all the pages blanked out, but I have some of the chapters somewhere. It might take me a bit to find them, but I can send them to you if you're stil interested. 

In any case, thanks for your readership, hope you'll keep watching me for more comics to come!
Lyokoheros Featured By Owner Edited Oct 8, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Maybe You're not the first one who's doing this but... having my name shortened to Lyoko is kinda strange for me(I don't know if You know but Lyoko is name of some virtual world - from one of my very favourite cartoon)... but back to the topic...
Maybe this story was finished before i even start to read it but even if sometimes this short notes under every page seem sometimes like directed to me(like this about this who didn't watch Doctor Who and can see regeneration for the first time). That was really cool story, despite the ending was disappointing... but well this I better write in comments to the last page of epilogue. 
And despite this disappointed at the end I'm still really willing to do this translation, so i'll send You my e-mail via private messege. And this that it make took some time... well that's not problem, even without that I have many things I work on (maybe even to many, but well who cares), and propably this translation wouldn't be done very fast. But still I really want to do it. 
Kartoffelkamm Featured By Owner May 1, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
man, this comic and Creeping In My Soul by Cryoshell...
i got no words for that...
Animatorsnake Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016
WAIT, wasn't that supposed to be given the the second person who made it out... oh right the Doctor isn't compatible
AngelflyXD Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2015  Hobbyist
doctar saved everybody- i mean pony
CatchyArtz Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
NinjaBrony817 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Student General Artist
:iconfliptableplz: FAHK NO DOCTAH
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Raven: HOLD ON. Didn't he say that the one in the second place will received the ultimate upgrade???
samsaragreen Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014
yes but hes not COMPATIBLE
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014
Raven: Well, they lied, so that doesn't matter.
TARDISpony101 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Student General Artist
i did NOT see that coming. i thought they would spare her or something.
serwalt Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014
their the Cybermen.... Or Ponies, they never spare anyone
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
For the Who fans who have watched most of the show, who didn't see this end coming?
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
Panel 18: meant to be "saved"
Persona22 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014
Wouldn't he regenerate into this pony?…
BrawnyStomp Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
if i tell you, it's going to be ruin
princessjulliet123 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
well... that sucks
Whisperofleafs Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
bellak33 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Anime-Greek Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist
if the Doctor end was him crying while smiling I would've burst into tears
monkeylegs Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I ish sad.. I must see 10 chapter. To link-clicking I shall.
StarlightGGiantess5 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
Chapter ending with Lyra becoming a Cyber Queen? Interesting story. I love it! :)
Heart-The-Legend Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
NNUU Now doctor whooves ,again f*ck you cyberponies f*ck you always
Blazemist Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LONG LIVED THE- I'm done wif dat
Doctorwholovesthe80s Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
no, no, NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Blooface Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
play the bad wolf music
WorldWalker128 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013
Welp, we all know what comes next, yes? Either Pokey Pierce or the Pegasus Doc will regenerate from the ashes, and the pheonix that is the last sane Timelord, will rise again!
Jeffthekillerlover99 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Realization in......3......2.......1 NO! NO! DANG IT! CRAP! SON OF A BISCUIT! CRAP!
xGeekyKittyx Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student Artist
Oh sh**
lkz665 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
whenever i look at the red eye thingy it looks like its animoated but its not. :3
Miss-Plain-Jane Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013
Oh...that's right...Derpy xD She's still here x3
fotland42 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013
Time Chargers are not easy to incinerate.

And did anybody think the cyberponies had any incentive to follow through on their promise of freedom?
StormCutie Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Student Writer
Red balll of DOOM
KateVunza Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Regenerate, Doctor! REGENERATE!!!!!
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Dr. X: Incineration..... The entire body would be turned into ash.... Regeneration is impossible in this situation.
EnchantiaHeartstring Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Student Writer
Flameshadow117 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The art has already improved considerably! I've seen some of the next chapters on the popular page, so I know you totally succeed at your goal of becoming a better artist! Way to go! :D

I love the idea that he's like, "I finally stopped running, and now I'm going to die..." Have you ever read Watership Down? The way rabbits refer to death is to say that rabbit has "stopped running". :P I fan-giggled a bit even though it was a serious moment :XD: :P 
OH, come on, it's not THAT serious! I know he's gonna regenerate! =P 
Retro7 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013   General Artist
MagicaITrevor Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
... Well, I, for one, welcome our new, awesome overlordess!
Critterkinz Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Student General Artist
ooooooooh, Cyber Queen..... 
Smooth, Lyra, real smooth...
ghcvi Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Student General Artist
doctorwhooves107 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Student Artist
SaverCat Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
Nyerguds Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
Wait... didn't they originally say that the one who ended second would be converted into some special thing? And now they say incinerated... buh.
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
If the Doctor had been compatible for conversion, they would've given him the ultimate upgrade and let Lyra go. But since the Doctor turned out to be incompatible, they decided to incinerate him and give the ultimate upgrade to Lyra.
Nyerguds Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Ahh, you're right. I missed that.
bryfury Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
hands down on the best chapter i've seen so far, this comic is godly
kacript Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
I knew there wasn't a prize that ends up with the winner remaining organic.
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ignore my previous comment. I posted it before reading the next part.
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