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Doctor Whooves - Upgrade END

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

You have done a brilliant job so far in the series, however I have noticed a small issue in the emotion of the characters. In the beginning of this series, there seemed to be more of an emotional quarrel than the classic "stopping evil" action cliche that Doctor Who follows. Now that you've gotten into the action, emotion has become more unpredictable. I'm not saying this is the case for this specific comic, but there are moments that are rather unpredictable. Also, recently, Derpy has been losing her personality, and is now becoming more of a puppet. That's about it.