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The story is addicting to read, and the characters behave just perfectly to what a brony would expect!
I also like it how you have Lyra and Bon Bon as just friends. I don't like when people ship those two.
However, the sorta-pairing between Dr. Whooves and Lyra is adorable! They are perfect for eachother in my opinion, though I still like DerpyxDr.Whooves. I'm trying to figure out which one I like better. XD
Your art style is very nice and expressive. Through the comic I saw some really epic pictures of the Doctor.
However, sometimes the anatomy is off, but you make up for it with the funny expressions and nice special effects.
This is an addicting comic and I really can't wait to read more!
I love this series and I am enjoying seeing your art style evolve. However, there are many rough edges in dome parts and Derpy's eyes seem a little off as does the anatomy in some places. I loved the human scenes (defiantly my favourite part of the art). The transitions between panels are also very interesting although there are very few features which jump out in them.
In terms of story, it is not greatly original and it relies mostly on elements of both shows. On the other hand, I do believe you have done a great job on the personalities of the characters, especially Lyra 's.
Anyway, overall I think this is great work and I look forward to chapter 3.
I hope this review wasn't too bad, I don't really do critiques but I wanted to feature this in MLP-Literature
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