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End Game Pt 8 ''End''by *Edowaado

Cartoons & Comics / Digital Media / Cartoons / Oekaki / Fanart / TV & Movies

I've been waiting so long to get to this very point! I hope you all enjoyed reading this chapter as much as I did making it.
I've decided to raise the bar with this comic, but to do that I need to become a better person. I want to become better at drawing, become better at english, write the story better than I have until now, go out and get some air with my rollerblades, and all while I still have to focus on the final semester for my school.

So I've decided to at least take a two weeks break to learn how to use photoshop which I've received recently, and train pony antomy and lineless backgrounds as well.

Doctor Whooves

Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 4: [link]
Chapter 5: [link]
Chapter 6: [link]
Chapter 7: [link]
Chapter 8: [link]

Chapter 9:
Part 1: [link]
Part 2: [link]
Part 3: [link]
Part 4: [link]
Part 5: [link]
Part 6: [link]
Part 7: [link]
Part 8: -You Are Here-

Chapter 10: [link]

Critique by ~PKPihyea Feb 5, 2013, 4:13:39 PM

This is just..so..action-y! I love the surprises and the unique artwork!

Its just so great! I indeed do love the parts where its sad,and then not a moment to soon,a little "humor" comes in! I am in love with this comic,Im so stunned by all the hard work you put into this comic.

The imagination and fright just..is so great! I hope your other readers enjoy as much as I do,and your "Ahh" and "swoosh" and soudn effects are just perfect.

Your artwork (im sure i've said this) IS just...perfect,im just SO JELLY

This story is fascinating and is full of wonder and suspense!
I love it,and I hope everyone does as well!

~PKpihyea!

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Critique by ~Hoekman-San Feb 3, 2013, 3:51:07 PM

i went through the whole story in 1 evening and loved every minute of it.

you combined the 2 very different worlds very smoothly into 1 story, without losing the core atmosphere of either one.

even tho the internet is beeing flooded with more pony content then most people can handle, the way you tell your story keeps many people (inc me) coming back for more.

take your time as you continue your story, i would hate to see the level of your work fall if you try to rush things

Do you have a prologue to this story, or recommend an other artists story ?