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Doctor Whooves - Upgrade Pt 6 by Edowaado Doctor Whooves - Upgrade Pt 6 by Edowaado
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:iconmurdareik:
I've been following your work since I got into chapter 2 by chance. I love these comics but as I decided to critique them (putting emphasis on this chapter), I'll try to be as unbiased as I can.

Firstly some remarkable observations:

-Your strongest point is the intensity of this chapter. The look of Lyra when Bon Bon is finally taken into the conversion room, combined with the previous panels it's simply amazing, very well-made.
-You have remained very loyal to the Doctor Who original screenplays. I think that gives the whole comic some familiar atmosphere which is very pleaseant for those familiarized with the show.

Some things to improve:

-Maybe it's a little evil from me to remark this, as it is a minimal flaw, but on the 26th panel, there's some sort of smudge at the cyber-pony leg. Probably you were on a rush and didn't notice. :XD:

Let's now go on to the general critique:

Vision: You're probably the most loyal artist to the Doctor Who spirit I know on dA. When resembling its stories on your comic series, the script is absolutely full of references to the show and the panels are practically copied shots. I like them very much!
Originality: It's good to see pony-adapted stories from the show, specially when you're dealing with complex characters as the human-obsessed Lyra and the Doctor pony impersonation. But, as it is not completely original I have to remove from here half star. However, as I think I said, you're probably one of the best Doctor Whooves artists on dA.
Technique: First of all, I removed here another half a star just because of my personal opinion on your drawing style. I find it sometimes kind of rough when I refer to pony physiognomy. But as I say, it is my personal opinion and I only shall give it a minimal importance. Your main virtue when talking about your technique is your capacity to create objects that combined on a panel have harmony. You think of the shots, then draw the ponies, make the backgrounds and then the shadowings. You make everything and combined together they become something very pleaseant to read.
Impact: I'll just say I'm making this critique because of the impact the last panels caused on me. :XD:

I hope you continue making such good works. I'll look forward for the next chapter of Doctor Whooves!

Good job! :D
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Okay so I have been following this comic for a while now, nd I have to say that it captures the essence of Doctor Who perfectly! I love how if follows tradition Doc Who story, something bad happens and instead of it getting better it falls off the deep end screaming in a ball of fire. I'm sure you will have the perfect ending for this as well, where the day is saved but I'm not sure if you will do something about the cyberponies being turned back into normal. Since it is equestria and all but I'll just have to wait and see, and I have nothing but patience for this comic, its worth the wait.

This update however spoke volumes! I was on the edge of my seat as lyra raced to try and save bon bon from cyberponification, only to fall short of her goal. I wonder how she will react when the chamber opens and there stands a cyberpony? I sit with great anticipation for the next update! This is 100% worth the wait and its action and suspense are both greatly appreciated!
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LoonixToonix Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
BOOOOOOOOOON BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! :'((
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Claricethetomboy357 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
D: 
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i am in pure shock 
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hypershock0 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2015
Goddammit!!!!! She was too late. :`(
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:iconcatchyartz:
CatchyArtz Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
WOW
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DeltaLead62 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015
Cant hold back.... tears
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samsaragreen Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO  BON BON MY FOUTH FAVE BACKROUND CARECTER
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1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
Ahman, I was wrong about them just putting them in shells and not removing the brains.
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ZombiesTaste Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
bonbonbonbonbonbonbon~
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chrismaticfool Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
Oh my, the intensity of this chapter.. NO! Bon Bon >_<
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:iconpersona22:
Persona22 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014
Every page makes you go "NOOOOOOOO!"
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princessjulliet123 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I have watched every episode of docter who since the 7th docter, its amazing to see the show turned into poines! p.s. this made me cry! :(
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bellak33 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
D: oh no bonbon
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:iconhexantam:
hexantam Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014
oh great, look like sonic the hedgehog comic turn pony into robosized
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xAnnabethChasex Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014
BBBOOONNN BBBOOONNN!!!! NNNNNNOOOOO!!!!!!
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BubblyProduction Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I remember this episode. It was the first episode I ever watched of Doctor Who and it was the most disturbing thing I ever saw. Now I'm watching ii in pony form and its like watching that episode plus a bit of the Rainbow Factory. Isn't it great?
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darthshade245 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
no dun convert bonbon... *sniff*
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Bre-Ce-Cuca Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!
BonBon NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
TT.TT no you.....
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WorldWalker128 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013
Even I have to feel sorry for Bon Bon now.
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olivebates Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is dark
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:iconrosspitsharkhunter:
RossPitsharkhunter Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013
Ah well she'll get over it. Hey, who's up for lunch?
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DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
:icone-hplz:
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:iconrosspitsharkhunter:
RossPitsharkhunter Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
I take it, no?
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DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
Raven: Take it as you're an ***hole.
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:iconrosspitsharkhunter:
RossPitsharkhunter Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
Why?
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
Raven: You tell me.
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:iconrosspitsharkhunter:
RossPitsharkhunter Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
I can't, because I didn't do anything wrong.
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DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
Raven: Look at your first comment and say that again.
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TurnaboutAkamia Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I wonder... Were these Cyberponies' designs based on any previous incarnation of the Mondas Cybermen (for instance, those seen in "Nightmare in Silver"), the Cybus Cybermen (which eventually wound up being adopted by the Mondas), or are they an original design?
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Edowaado Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Mostly original design, Etc. I felt that the typical empty eyes weren't that scary.

Though the color scheme was inspired by this video www.youtube.com/watch?v=kt3qZY…
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ishifishy Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
NOOOO!!!!!!!!
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:iconxuchilbra:
Xuchilbra Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's okay.....he's a doctor......*sniff*....
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DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
Dr. X: Not that sort of doctor....
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katdrawings Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
Bon bon...no...
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:iconhexcurse:
Hexcurse Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I was literally screaming at this page.
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:iconmoonrise09:
Moonrise09 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Student General Artist
B-Bon Bon.. NOOOOOOOO D:
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Fierce-Dities-Link Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
Ouch.
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AhO4464 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist
T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T T-T ........
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Lucian05 Featured By Owner May 27, 2013
Damm I feel just like in Rise of steel when Rose and his father was being converted...
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DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
Raven: ....... His?!
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SkrillexxFH Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconcryingplz:
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spottedstar1123 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
No BON BON!!!!
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LarryKitty Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I feel sad...you made me feel sad
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CS-epicness Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
my heartbeat is just like thud thud thud thud......
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DragonSoul4579 Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
just great now I'm depressed
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Zoruaofepic Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Those torture devices/conversion chambers have always been pretty creepy in Doctor Who, you captured this perfectly. Well done.

I feel so sorry for all those background ponies, glad none of my ocs are in this dystopian event
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nuke1007 Featured By Owner May 3, 2013
wait... is lyra going to do some badasss shit? i think she is.
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Spazz6768 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
I am not an easy man to please, especially with crossovers, but you have so perfectly captured the feel of the characters and the franchises used that I can find absolutely nothing to complain about. It's just plain awesome.
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Edowaado Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No, you're plain awesome :iconmetromanplz:
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KKgirls Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
This was always the episode that creeped me out the most. And you have captured it perfectly. Congratulations. i shall now go and weep in the shower.
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Time-Moose Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:nuu::nuu::nuu::nuu:

That torture device. :iconconfusedshockplz: Have a spoon in meh mouth like Sam. XD
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