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Doctor Whooves - Twists and Turns Pt 6 by Edowaado Doctor Whooves - Twists and Turns Pt 6 by Edowaado
Hah, I remember my first rejection when I was 10.

School was cancelled today. So I figured I'll finish this part.

No words needed.

But what good is it, to motivate others, if you can't help yourself.

:bulletgreen: Doctor Whooves

Chapter 1: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Th…
Chapter 2: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Fr…
Chapter 3: fav.me/d50tqux
Chapter 4: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Ri…
Chapter 5: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Up…
Chapter 6: fav.me/d5eodb6
Chapter 7: fav.me/d5gxypf

Chapter 8:
Part 1: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Tw…
Part 2: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Tw…
Part 3: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Tw…
Part 4: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Tw…
Part 5: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Tw…
Part 6: -You are here-
Part 7: fav.me/d5k3wjs
Part 8: fav.me/d5kpw62
Part 9: edowaado.deviantart.com/#edit/…
Part 10: fav.me/d5msxg5
Part 11: fav.me/d5pdhq5
Part 12: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Tw…

Chapter 9: fav.me/d5q7vd9
Chapter 10: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Ne…
Chapter 11: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Re…
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:iconthecupcakequeen101:
Critique by TheCupcakeQueen101 Nov 1, 2012, 1:50:25 PM
I really love this comic! This is certainly one of the best Doctor Whooves comics and if not the best!

This is a very good comic, the story will make you not want to stop reading!It's like one of those good movies that you want to watch over and over again!

I love you're drawings! You capture the facial expression very well, you could well have a job as an animator!

When it comes to Originality, the story is very original I have never seen a story with Lyra and Doctor Whooves, though there is still the whole Doctor Whooves and some creatures which appear in the show. The Part about the Games might sound like the HungerGames at first but it really isn't at all!

Please make a new part, I can't wait for more!
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I find this current chapter of the comic sends the readers many different emotions to be considered, that though this is a serious, high stakes type matter, humor is implemented to either lighten the mood or keep your audience interested, and I find that to be a very effective and entertaining element. But what I really need to bring to attention is the character development within this particular strip

Even though Iron Will isn't actually learning anything new, the audience is learning about his past, thus clearing a previously shaded area within the being known as Iron Will to the readers. I have written and re-written this section of my critique probably for the fifth time now because I cannot seem to explain my impressions strong enough to really encompass what it is I want to say, so I'll try to be as blunt as possible...

This particular section of the comic is outstanding, and though Iron Will's flashbacks have little to no script, the message is given clearly. From what we know about Iron Will in his previous conversation with Lyra, we get a daunting feeling of whatever we see in his past eventually ends in a very bad way. This style of storytelling is powerful, and makes your audience invested and emotionally connected to the characters. This is far from most comics I've seen where a character would be introduced in a more "here's some Pinkie Pie" type feel, whereas you not only introduce the characters, but build upon them as well. For example, Iron Will being one of the survivors in the invasion makes sense, mainly due to the fact that he has a will of iron, but not in the least bit did I expect his background to be presented, or that I would love him as a character more than I previously did.

The entire comic thus far has been no less than perfect, and is in fact better than any fanfiction I've ever read. The comic feels like an actual Dr. Who episode, and everything falls into place nicely.

Though I will not suggest including this flashback deal as a normal thing within your comic, it definitely is a nice touch in this particular scene.

Like I said before, I am incapable of expressing my true emotions and thoughts on your comic, and even now I have failed to present such information. This comic is amazing, and hopefully it's popularity will grow until it becomes an officially fan-made animated episode, like Double Rainboom or Snowdrop. Writing such as this can only be made by the hand of a master, and you have made it there.

I look forward to reading what is left in store for me in the coming chapters.

Just know that you have created a masterpiece.
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:iconmistingwolfandpony:
mistingwolfandpony Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015
IRON WILL IS BEST MINATER!
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:iconvinnymartello:
VinnyMartello Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I got's me a hilariously depressing rejection/breakup story if you're in for a laugh.
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:icon1cosmiconsciousness:
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
Well he never has had legitimate reasons for people not to like him.
Also, were the recolorings of the roses supposed to show how he felt, like dark for fear, doubt, and pain, while light was for hope and courage? Or was that an accident?
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:icon186lilly:
186lilly Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Student General Artist
is he half human?
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:iconmattx125:
MattX125 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Student General Artist
Last I checked Mythology.... yes.
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:icon186lilly:
186lilly Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Student General Artist
wow cool
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:iconrussetbramblepelt:
RussetBramblePelt Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist
This is the best Doctor Whooves comic ever... I mean it. I may have not read many, but this by far is the greatest. Clap 
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:iconprincessjulliet123:
princessjulliet123 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
thats so sad! if somone did that for me, I would dance with them! I care for peoples feelings not there looks :)
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:iconashtotron35:
Ashtotron35 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Student Artist
I like how you are going into iron wills past
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:iconsaddust:
Saddust Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
Poor guy...
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:iconstarfallenwolf:
StarfallenWolf Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
D: THE FLASHBACK!
Iron Will is quickly becoming one of my favorite characters in this.
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:iconlordmep:
lordmep Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Great character flashbacks. 
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:iconnati11184:
nati11184 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My feeeeels :tears:
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:icondoctorwholovesthe80s:
You are a great writer! I was in a funk earlier today, and your comic has made me laugh, cry, squee and more!
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:iconxwilted--rosex:
XWilted--RoseX Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awee this comment makes me love Iron will
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:iconworldwalker128:
WorldWalker128 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013
Redheart has no heart.
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Raven: For a second, I thought that was Redheart. However, looking at the mane and tail, it definitely isn't her.
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:iconworldwalker128:
WorldWalker128 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Pony-that-looks-like-Redheart has no heart.
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Raven: .... Yyyeaaah....
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:iconandreas75490:
andreas75490 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist
A girlfriend?.....


.... Waste of time if you ask me.
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Raven: Probably 'cause you had the bad side of it.
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:iconandreas75490:
andreas75490 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist
I doubt you'd call that the bad side of it. Thoughts change, and with so; New.
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Edited Aug 25, 2014
Raven: Whaat? Your grammar makes no sense.
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:iconandreas75490:
andreas75490 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist
It doesn't need to in order to be understood. It's easily understandable if you want it to be.
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Raven: If it was, I wouldn't be asking that.
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:iconandreas75490:
andreas75490 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist
But I know you understand. It's a sentence, a bit cloudy perhaps, but a sentence rather simple, really. 
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014
Raven: I don't. It's not even a proper sentence!
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alexamiha Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013
Well i had a girlfrind once...now is in Swedes sooo it wasn't a good idea.It seems more like a......waste of your personal time....
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:iconworldwalker128:
WorldWalker128 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013
Dating seems to be more trouble than it's worth, and Children are worse. Having bee a child, I can vouch for that.
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Raven: Kids...
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:iconandreas75490:
andreas75490 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist
MmmHmm.
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:iconnightflyer22:
NightFlyer22 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I agree. I don't need boyfriends neither. :)
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Raven: Maybe you don't, though it'd definitely be nice to have one.
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:iconaydinprower7:
AydinPrower7 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013   General Artist
Finally! A pair of people who share my opinion on the matter. :XD:
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Raven: Maybe you don't, though it'd definitely be nice to have one.
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:iconnightflyer22:
NightFlyer22 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yup :D
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:iconandreas75490:
andreas75490 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist
^^
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:iconrosspitsharkhunter:
RossPitsharkhunter Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013
Now fat kid, repeat after me. This is how you get a girl to dance with you. Ehem *clears throat* "Hey bitch! Wanna have sex?"
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Raven: Oh, sure. Like that worked for you.
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:iconrosspitsharkhunter:
RossPitsharkhunter Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Never tried it.
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Raven: Then, don't tell people to do it.
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:iconrosspitsharkhunter:
RossPitsharkhunter Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
I'm not, it's a joke.
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Raven: Not funny. Again.
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:iconrosspitsharkhunter:
RossPitsharkhunter Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014
To you. Again. You are not the kind of comedy god you think you are.
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014
Raven: No one likes dark humour, bud.
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:icondakukira:
DakuKira Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
I'll use that one day & will probably get the crap beat out of me
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:iconrosspitsharkhunter:
RossPitsharkhunter Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
Why thank you.
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:iconlunasservant:
LunasServant Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013
wow, Iron Will is just like me :(  everybody comes to me for advice, yet I can't seem to help myself.
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
(OoC: I know the feeling....)
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:iconthemoustachequeen97:
themoustachequeen97 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Poor Iron Will. It is kinda weird for him to be hitting on a pony though.
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