Doctor Whooves - The Games Pt 4

This specific comment was absolutely brilliant. Your use of facial expressions are absolutely hysterical, I'm really seeing exciting plot development, and you're using humor in just the right moments.

However, in the big picture of the story, there was one thing I would like to advise.

Try to maintain the characteristics of the tenth doctor. I've noticed every now and then he shifts from being very serious to being silly in a rather spontaneous manner. Don't do this; that's what the eleventh doctor does (and to be honest, I really don't like that about him). You're still doing well with this area; just something to remember.