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Doctor Whooves - Rebirth Pt 7 by Edowaado Doctor Whooves - Rebirth Pt 7 by Edowaado
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Your style has shown great improvement over a short amount of time. the lines are smooth, expressions are more unique and the attention to detail is remarkable. As for the story, this is a great example of the Doctor's ability to think a step or two ahead of his enemies. The use of the Sonic Screwdriver as a "magic wand" as some, including myself, would put it does weigh this down quite a bit; however, the overall understanding of the character and his capabilities shines through. You clearly have a great story to tell here and I can appreciate that.
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First time critiquing, so just go with me on this one. I hope to see the new one soon, as I just got set up here in Texas.

Vision:
It is easy to see that you have an idea what you're doing, and what you plan to be doing later. You make each new step of this story easily followed but not too obvious, so we have to keep thinking, wondering. It's great. I'd say you have more vision than Foresight!

Originality:
It has been a long while since you started and lot of Doctor Whooves stuff has been done, but you've made it your own! You have taken the character, made him as Doctor Who as possible, and made it as pony as one can (other than the innocence, which is and isn't missed). You have taken characters we know and love, and made them your own, given them a life in this story not many have even thought of!

Technique:
I love the way I've seen your paneling change, how great it looks now. The art has been great for a while now, and I have enjoyed every new piece that comes. The story looks fresh, like it could be printed and sold!

Impact:
When I first stumbled upon this I thought, "Oh great, more Doctor Whooves, no one ever does it how I like." You didn't start the story how I feel it should, but you have shown me the way and made me think "Derpy is good, I'm okay with this." I have taken yours as the only true Doctor Whooves, and I get giddy when reading. You are a great writer, and an amazing artist as well. I'm jealous, and inspired.
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HyuugaHigure Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014
Woo! It's victory time :iconraritydealwithitplz: *cue I Am the Doctor* music!

It's getting me excited exactly like in major turnaround of 11's time!
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1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
Getting to the good part. Hearing the victory music and the Doctor's voice.
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:iconlordmep:
lordmep Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can almost hear the victory music.
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Time-Moose Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I could actually hear the Doctor Who theme music starting. XD
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Blazemist Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pfft. I try that on people sometimes all like "I know what you did =-=" and they'll be all like "What'd I do? :I"
Cyberponies are just too dumb for that, apparently.
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:icondoctorwholovesthe80s:
I can really hear David Tennant's voice during this page. Awesome!
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:iconvaryllus:
Varyllus Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013
Is this fear the Cyber Prince feels?
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Sanaakota Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Just a quick thing I noticed, not to offend at all I hope, but in panel 39 "pure" should be "purely". :)
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JediBronies Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your art has improved so much since you first started! This is amazing! I can't wait till you update, here is my fave, watch and compliment to you!  Tardis a tiny animation 
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DrDiceRoller Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I'm shaking in my seat with every new part. This is such brilliant work.
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Nutrea Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013   Traditional Artist
aaaah he's going to regenerate into this guy isn't he: images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__c… (idk ive just heard he's a lot of people's headcanon regeneration of doctor whooves)
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Terrortheslayer Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
This is geting good XD
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:icongary0ak:
Gary0ak Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
"I'm a step ahead you"

"Then I'm  23 steps ahead you"

:XD:
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:iconserwalt:
serwalt Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
HAH! im 24 steps ahead of you *smiles*
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:icongary0ak:
Gary0ak Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
Hah! I'm 238935923 Miles ahead of you *grins crookedly*
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HugoMndz Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor souls. I'm 1E63 steps ahead you 
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:iconserwalt:
serwalt Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
im infinity steps ahead of you guys
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:iconhugomndz:
HugoMndz Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, damnit
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:iconbigdon887:
bigdon887 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
Now, divide the total number of steps each progressive person is ahead of the previous by 0 and you will get the number of steps I am ahead of y'all.
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CyberfoxVII Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013
Ah, well I'm...

Uh... hold on a sec... um... >:/

*takes a couple moments to do the math*

...Bah.  Nevermind, you're 0.59 steps ahead of me.  Well played.
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bigdon887 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
:)
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serwalt Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
i got 0
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:iconserwalt:
serwalt Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
WAIT I CAN! *does the math* okay i give up....
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ingtobopbop Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
 This could easily be released as a retail comic with artwork maybe revamped a little and it would be a smash hit. Congratulations on totally nailing the Doctor. It's tricky to nail such a beloved character while still making it feel like MLP:FIM. Congratulations Edowaado, you've created one of the best comics on deviant art. Looking forward to next issue... if that's what you call them.
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Kipaji Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
What I appreciate about this whole story is that I can see your artistic and creative progress as you've gone along. It really is noticeable and wonderful how much this comic has done for your skills. And needless to say... you've had me pretty riveted the whole way, and I really want to know how this is going to turn out... I don't know if we're approaching the end yet, but it's been a fun ride regardless.
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SILENTPHANTOMOMEGA Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
I can't let you do that Doctor XD
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:iconphforever:
phforever Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:) 
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EclipseWolf64 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ahahahahaaaaaa
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PortalDash Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
BEST COMIC EVER!!!
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temporos Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The hypothetical situation ploy. So like the Doctor! :#1:
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:iconerpae:
erpae Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WOOHOO GO DOCTOR!!!
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:icondarthtallis:
DarthTallis Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
Hahahahaha~! Oh, look! You're... Well, sweat is the wrong term. You're leaking. :3
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:iconbadbloodkiller:
badbloodkiller Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013
You think he's taking a leak?XD
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damico611 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
He's bluffing, I'm calling it. Anyways wonderful twist Ed
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Of course he's bluffing. :)
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:icondamaneman:
DaManeMan Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
*I am the Doctor starts to play*
Awesome
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:icongroo567:
groo567 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013
Definitely played that in another browser tab as I read this page. :D
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Quasi-Harkness Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Gosh, if what the Doctor said is true... That is one heck of a great plot twist you have there! I bet none of us readers saw that coming.
Still, that's a lot of supposing...
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SunstarPhoenix Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013
*jaw drops*

I can't wait for the next installment. Absolutely wonderful and very engaging. I was sucked right in!

-Kai
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:icondzamie:
dzamie Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013
Considering the Doctor, he's bluffing. But no reason for Foresight to know that.
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:iconnyerguds:
Nyerguds Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
Well, bluffing or not, he made sure Foresight-bot realizes that he can NOT foresee everything... and is possibly tricking him into making mistakes.
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adamdwarf Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013
well hypothetically speaking suppose he isn't bluffing.
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:iconcritterkinz:
Critterkinz Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Student General Artist
But he has done the same thing and been bluffing. 
Like whenever he had to fight the "ironsights" in WWII and had a doughnut
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adamdwarf Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
true but hypothetically speaking he may OR may not be bluffing
remember its all hypothetical. 
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:iconcritterkinz:
Critterkinz Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Student General Artist
Yeah, but still, HE'S SO CONVINCING!
you can never tell with the Doctor
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:iconadamdwarf:
adamdwarf Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013
and thats the point
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:iconcritterkinz:
Critterkinz Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Student General Artist
On a different note, I just found out how to write in Gallifrean
Owned
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:iconadamdwarf:
adamdwarf Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013
really how?
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gabrielthewolf15 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013
smart
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ESF-Shadow Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I just love it when crap comes together like that XD
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