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Doctor Whooves - Rebirth Pt 4 by Edowaado Doctor Whooves - Rebirth Pt 4 by Edowaado
The only reason he could teleport away with his screwdriver in the last part was because there was an teleportation device near by.

And look! It's a Spike Wolf just like the one from Chapter 1 :D
:bulletgreen: Doctor Whooves

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Chapter 9:
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Chapter 11
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Part 3:…
Part 4: -You Are Here-
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Part 6:…
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From my critique in Chapter 9 Part 3 to now, you really did improve in such a short amount of time, and looking back at that strip really brings me nostalgia.

I am going to proceed to critiquing this specific strip:

The characters positioning and expressions are great, and the coloring is really nice. However, sometimes your positioning of the machines around the characters in the background is a bit off. For example, in the second and third panel, the pipes and machine don't really coincide with the walls around it. Though it is really a small detail, but it would be preferable if you could make it nice and geometrically satisfying. Otherwise, great job.

Now for overall critique on wholesale comic:

The anatomy of the characters have gone a LONG way since the beginning, the detail of the background is more specific every strip, and the lighting is more dynamic as you go along. I really mean this, I am astonished by what you are doing. I don't know what it is you are doing, whether you practiced, learned, or whatever, you really are stepping it up.

Not only is your artwork great, but the writing is so superb; your intelligence really is reflected with the dialogue. I especially loves how the Cyber Prince was describing fate, and how it was all calculated. That is true writing right there, and the precision of the language that was executed in that short moment, just amazing.

From my previous critique, can I call you a fully mastered artist? I must say, you are getting there, and near your fullest potential. I have, and will always watch you until the end.

Keep on going, and don't stop no matter what.
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I am new to this 'Critique' thing, but i think i can manage it.

This comic has cliffhangers, action and originality. The way he brings in the conflict is so visual that it seems real.

All the characters have changed in many ways making some even changing their personality completely even giving the illusion of a different person. (Pony)

Overall, this comic has the best features of a professional artist, the amazing hook of keeping you interested and the fast making of the new ones gives this comic an outstanding record of amazement.

Well, i would have said more but the limit keeps me from doing so.
Make more and then just keep going-
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Animatorsnake Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016
RedwallWarrior11 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
One point: Mr. Cyber Prince, there is such a thing as chaos theory, which states that if you miss the movement of a single molecule on the other side of the observable universe, your "equation" will be fundementally flawed. While there are still limits, there are just too many variables.
Gen-SilverChicken Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
:icondinkleberg-plz: Spike Wolf....
StreamSecret Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i hope foresight can fight against his metallic self and win, becoming a good guy and save all the others.
JazzyLick Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014
I saw the headphone-thingies on the second Cybershade and I was just like
o_o deadlox? :icondeadloxplz:
iiiBudder Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2015  Student Artist
Omfg lmao, i thought it as well when i saw ur comment then looked at Cybershade. XD
Blazemist Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist confused:iconwhatdidijustplz:
Novalis14 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013
okay I just got to say this is amazing. At first i thought this would be a mildy clever comic done by someone who is good at drawing and decent at writing but you have done a great job of writing. I am a Amateur writer and am currently writing two books and a MLP fan fiction, I absolutly love how you wrote the cyber princes description of the scientific explanation of fate. I always belive that the best gift a fiction writer can have is the ability to expalain anything they come up with by making their own belivible logic and applying it. You have done that and it is awsome!!!!

So to summarize YOUR AN AWESOME WRITER DUDE!!!!!!
AmberCatProductions Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay so now I am completely convinced that someone on the Doctor Who team reads this comic and stole the Foresight/Cyber Prince exchange for Nightmare in Silver. Seriously. Because if they didn't, then that would be just creepy.
Edowaado Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nah, I was actually inspired by the Nightmare of Silver for this.
AmberCatProductions Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
...You've destroyed my fantasy D:
kacript Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
Oh great, not that metallic monster again! Only this time Iron Will is working with it.
gaybiez Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I just realized what that thing is!
StormCutie Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Student Writer
Must've made a shell for the shattered skeleton...
Or just grabbed one from the forest and 'Upgraded' It
barrybobman Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
I'd like to introduce the Cyber Prince to Quantum Mechanics. Introduce him to true randomness.
Alairis Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Good ol' entropy.
Acacia-Rabbit-Desert Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
Celestia Protect them!
Enmar123 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
poor foresight
ashyfur524 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beeooow Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
Ah, the Fate VS Cause/Effect argument. This is a great use of it! Keep up the good work, we have faith in you!
thewajor Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
Nothing is random? I see Cybermen haven't researched quantum physics yet...
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Exactly what I was thinking! I'm glad someone brought this up.
StrawberryMadoka Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013
All I can see is the seen of Twilight Sparkle becoming a Princess, except now this with Foresight and the Cyber Prince singing to Foresight
But Great work, you really have improved since the beginning and I cannot wait for Part 5 of this comment
1scourge1 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Student General Artist
sugar-plum123 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
When will part 5 be up?
PannaDonka Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wait, wait, wait.. That comic still is better than i expected xd draw little faster, PLEASE :D
BroDash Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
Can't... stop... reading...
Jristz Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
Never watch Dr Who, Look for a it of luck this comic, and read all in one shoot whitout reading all the dialog... I can underestan the majority...
but... One single Unicorn robot? really? and all the others, Twilight, Twilight Velvet, Written Script, Master, Night Light, etc, all was cybor-roboti-whatever-the-word-is?
and the exterior, all surrender with a simple resistance or rebles or either what happen on the exterior
Edowaado Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He's an unicorn because he's the Cyber 'Prince'. All the others either earth-pegasus or unicorn pony, are just turning regular cyber ponies. Cyber 'Queen' would be an Alicorn.
Jristz Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
ok, but this not explain much to me...
but: what is happen outside, there is any resistence from the normal ponies, what happen whit our 4 Alicorn princess??

there many question here and I look these type of things too, but anyway I like this comic
Edowaado Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The Cyber Ponies have proven to be superior to avarage ponies. But yeah resistence might be going on. I've made journal for that regarding the Princesses and Mane Six…
Jristz Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
anks that explain (not a lot but..) enought for me
mrpuntastic Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
Its like 4 in the morning and i was plannining on sleeping and then this amazing comic pops and well, the internet strikes again haha lol
rainbowdashrulezs Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
keep going i cant get get enough! woweei!!!!
pokedotcat Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Student General Artist
Write more!
Evsworld Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Please keep writing these! The heart and effort put into each comic to me is completely worth it! The story made me cry.. That is not an easy thing to do but it is to show that we care. Even just as readers I feel that the story means something
xX-LittleWaitress-Xx Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
amazing plot
theironflower08 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
i need to stay in this page, so i can know what happen to the doctor, derpy, and lyra.....IF YOUR HEARING THIS WRITER!!!! PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY AND MAKE IT QUICK!! OR I'LL HAVE TO FIND YOU AND FORCE YOU TO DO SO....DO YOU HEAR ME, FOOOOOORCE!!!!!!!
rainbowdashrulezs Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
i feel u!!!!
theironflower08 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
im not a good at waiting....
x--Mirage--x Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
An interesting plot full of twists and turns.  I started reading this comic today and couldn't stop.  Can't wait for more!
LTblackcoat Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013
although a nice theory I seriously dought you can ever predict "fate" as it does not even exist. (in my opinion)

by the way superb work. (the art style is now very advanced then when it all started)
StarDragonInc Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
Nice Cyber dragon
summerfox1 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This comic is amazing! I can't wait to see more! :D
CS-epicness Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sugar-plum123 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love your comic. But it would be wonderful if we get to see derpy and doctor. Also can you give derpy some more lines.:) (Smile) :D (Big Grin) 
iKittehs Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You make this too awesome!
TheKoboldNecromancer Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Student Writer
It's very awesome that Lyra has evolved like she is now, even though you know she's hurting.  And Whooves, you're really good at going the distance!
HonorableInsanity Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
This is so good! I can hardly wait for more, although it was a pleasant surprise when I thought I was going to run out at Chapter 10 part 6, and there kept on being another link at the bottom, and there ended up being another 6 pages!
SiaTheSquidQueen Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
because of this amazing comic i found doctor who and i loved it thank you for this amazing comic
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