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Doctor Whooves - Rebirth Pt 4 by Edowaado Doctor Whooves - Rebirth Pt 4 by Edowaado
The only reason he could teleport away with his screwdriver in the last part was because there was an teleportation device near by.

And look! It's a Spike Wolf just like the one from Chapter 1 :D
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:bulletgreen: Doctor Whooves

Chapter 1: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Th…
Chapter 2: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Fr…
Chapter 3: fav.me/d50tqux
Chapter 4: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Ri…
Chapter 5: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Up…
Chapter 6: fav.me/d5eodb6
Chapter 7: fav.me/d5gxypf
Chapter 8: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Tw…
Chapter 9: fav.me/d5q7vd9
Chapter 10: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Ne…
Chapter 11
Part 1: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Re…
Part 2: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Re…
Part 3: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Re…
Part 4: -You Are Here-
Part 5: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Re…
Part 6: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Re…
Part 7: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Re…
Part 8: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Do…
part 9: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Do…
Part 10: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Do…
Part 11: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Do…
Part 12: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Do…


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From my critique in Chapter 9 Part 3 to now, you really did improve in such a short amount of time, and looking back at that strip really brings me nostalgia.

I am going to proceed to critiquing this specific strip:

The characters positioning and expressions are great, and the coloring is really nice. However, sometimes your positioning of the machines around the characters in the background is a bit off. For example, in the second and third panel, the pipes and machine don't really coincide with the walls around it. Though it is really a small detail, but it would be preferable if you could make it nice and geometrically satisfying. Otherwise, great job.

Now for overall critique on wholesale comic:

The anatomy of the characters have gone a LONG way since the beginning, the detail of the background is more specific every strip, and the lighting is more dynamic as you go along. I really mean this, I am astonished by what you are doing. I don't know what it is you are doing, whether you practiced, learned, or whatever, you really are stepping it up.

Not only is your artwork great, but the writing is so superb; your intelligence really is reflected with the dialogue. I especially loves how the Cyber Prince was describing fate, and how it was all calculated. That is true writing right there, and the precision of the language that was executed in that short moment, just amazing.

From my previous critique, can I call you a fully mastered artist? I must say, you are getting there, and near your fullest potential. I have, and will always watch you until the end.

Keep on going, and don't stop no matter what.
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I am new to this 'Critique' thing, but i think i can manage it.

This comic has cliffhangers, action and originality. The way he brings in the conflict is so visual that it seems real.

All the characters have changed in many ways making some even changing their personality completely even giving the illusion of a different person. (Pony)

Overall, this comic has the best features of a professional artist, the amazing hook of keeping you interested and the fast making of the new ones gives this comic an outstanding record of amazement.

Well, i would have said more but the limit keeps me from doing so.
Make more and then just keep going-
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StreamSecret Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i hope foresight can fight against his metallic self and win, becoming a good guy and save all the others.
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JazzyLick Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014
I saw the headphone-thingies on the second Cybershade and I was just like
o_o deadlox? :icondeadloxplz:
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Blazemist Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
...so confused:iconwhatdidijustplz:
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Novalis14 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013
okay I just got to say this is amazing. At first i thought this would be a mildy clever comic done by someone who is good at drawing and decent at writing but you have done a great job of writing. I am a Amateur writer and am currently writing two books and a MLP fan fiction, I absolutly love how you wrote the cyber princes description of the scientific explanation of fate. I always belive that the best gift a fiction writer can have is the ability to expalain anything they come up with by making their own belivible logic and applying it. You have done that and it is awsome!!!!

So to summarize YOUR AN AWESOME WRITER DUDE!!!!!!
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AmberCatProductions Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay so now I am completely convinced that someone on the Doctor Who team reads this comic and stole the Foresight/Cyber Prince exchange for Nightmare in Silver. Seriously. Because if they didn't, then that would be just creepy.
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Edowaado Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nah, I was actually inspired by the Nightmare of Silver for this.
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AmberCatProductions Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
...You've destroyed my fantasy D:
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kacript Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
Oh great, not that metallic monster again! Only this time Iron Will is working with it.
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ihategeorgethetree Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I just realized what that thing is!
:iconironwillplz:
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StormCutie Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Student Writer
Must've made a shell for the shattered skeleton...
Or just grabbed one from the forest and 'Upgraded' It
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