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Doctor Whooves - Rebirth Pt 2 by Edowaado Doctor Whooves - Rebirth Pt 2 by Edowaado
I know what I said in my last description, but thanks to the invention of copypaste I got this done quicker than I had hoped. I also want to ask you guys for a little favor, so I wanted to make this in return :) I'll make a journal about the favor, it's just a poll you have to click once, so my class can win a competition for our final school day < : )

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:bulletgreen: Doctor Whooves

Chapter 1: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Th…
Chapter 2: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Fr…
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Chapter 11
Part 1: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Re…
Part 2: -You Are Here-
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Part 7: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Re…
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Part 11: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Do…
Part 12: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Do…


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:iconeclipsewolf64:
Before I start getting into the nitty-gritty details of this, I'm going to say one thing: This is worthy of being published. You've improved from the first page, the suspense hooks in a lot of readers, and the intensity in some parts is almost close to the fiery words of some great writers. We'll wait eagerly for the next part!
Cyber Foresight's dialogue reflects part of his former character; it shows that he still believes slightly in fate. Hell, if it wasn't from a cyber pony, people might think the conversions are good. And you've made good use of the "show, not tell" technique; the Doctor is shown as a selfless, brave pony instead of told so. And I like the Doctor x Derpy love woven into the last page.
But in panel 23, his eye is a bit off-center. I think that you've overdone the regeneration glow and made it too yellow in some panels. In panel 22, the glow is more of a yellow ball than a swath of gold. And Lyra is on the fence between clueless and damsel in distress in this part. Cyber Foresight's 3D look seems a little out of place, because it sticks out too much. Derpy's been quiet, though. Could she be planning something? Plot twists are your thing!
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I'm going to give it to you, you can really build up a story. This comic has reached all levels of tension and you still push more and more to my limit. I would recommend this to all my friends, and not just for the Doctor. You have made us, the reader connect with your characters, and made us really care. I barley held in my man tears at the Iron Will story and ending, and I didn't find him all that interesting of a character in the show. You made my blood run cold at the end of the battle between the Doctor and Foresight, as the implications of the Doctors words sank in. Now you're bringing all that to a head, and sitting on the edge of my seat to see what happens next, because I can't tell where this comic is going.
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Quinntus79 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
"A New Era of Steel." So Foresight is a Cyberpony version of Stalin? I always the cyberponies were kind of like communists.
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AbandonedScarab Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
Foresight: "1v1 me, kid."
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TheArtistPony Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Use a massive regeneration to take them out!
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:icondoctorwholovesthe80s:
When the Doctor is glowing and says "I've got nothing to lose anymore..." HIDE FROM THE INETIVABLE EXPLOSIONS OF BADASS AWESOME!!!
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starfire6565 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013
i like part 1 because foresight asked if the doctor had feelings for derpy and he said no so foresight said to delet her but only to see his reaction and it was like he did have feelings for derpy. :)
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WorldWalker128 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
And then he turns into a Diamond Dog, and crushes his limbs between his teeth, realizes what he's done afterwards, and feels awful.

I've never seen the Doc be regenerated as anything other than a Pony in all the various fanfics and fanarts.
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troybird Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
nooooooooo man...he's going Sper Saiyan doctor mode xD 
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MissSindy Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013
oh Foresight *sniffle*
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RossPitsharkhunter Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013
Actually you do, but we'll get to that another time!
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Enmar123 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
sweet a fight :D
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