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Doctor Whooves - Rebirth Pt 2 by Edowaado Doctor Whooves - Rebirth Pt 2 by Edowaado
I know what I said in my last description, but thanks to the invention of copypaste I got this done quicker than I had hoped. I also want to ask you guys for a little favor, so I wanted to make this in return :) I'll make a journal about the favor, it's just a poll you have to click once, so my class can win a competition for our final school day < : )

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:bulletgreen: Doctor Whooves

Chapter 1: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Th…
Chapter 2: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Fr…
Chapter 3: fav.me/d50tqux
Chapter 4: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Ri…
Chapter 5: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Up…
Chapter 6: fav.me/d5eodb6
Chapter 7: fav.me/d5gxypf
Chapter 8: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Tw…
Chapter 9: fav.me/d5q7vd9
Chapter 10: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Ne…
Chapter 11
Part 1: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Re…
Part 2: -You Are Here-
Part 3: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Re…
Part 4: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Re…
Part 5: edowaado.deviantart.com#/art/R…
Part 6: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Re…
Part 7: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Re…
Part 8: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Do…
part 9: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Do…
Part 10: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Do…
Part 11: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Do…
Part 12: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Do…


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:iconeclipsewolf64:
Before I start getting into the nitty-gritty details of this, I'm going to say one thing: This is worthy of being published. You've improved from the first page, the suspense hooks in a lot of readers, and the intensity in some parts is almost close to the fiery words of some great writers. We'll wait eagerly for the next part!
Cyber Foresight's dialogue reflects part of his former character; it shows that he still believes slightly in fate. Hell, if it wasn't from a cyber pony, people might think the conversions are good. And you've made good use of the "show, not tell" technique; the Doctor is shown as a selfless, brave pony instead of told so. And I like the Doctor x Derpy love woven into the last page.
But in panel 23, his eye is a bit off-center. I think that you've overdone the regeneration glow and made it too yellow in some panels. In panel 22, the glow is more of a yellow ball than a swath of gold. And Lyra is on the fence between clueless and damsel in distress in this part. Cyber Foresight's 3D look seems a little out of place, because it sticks out too much. Derpy's been quiet, though. Could she be planning something? Plot twists are your thing!
What do you think?
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I'm going to give it to you, you can really build up a story. This comic has reached all levels of tension and you still push more and more to my limit. I would recommend this to all my friends, and not just for the Doctor. You have made us, the reader connect with your characters, and made us really care. I barley held in my man tears at the Iron Will story and ending, and I didn't find him all that interesting of a character in the show. You made my blood run cold at the end of the battle between the Doctor and Foresight, as the implications of the Doctors words sank in. Now you're bringing all that to a head, and sitting on the edge of my seat to see what happens next, because I can't tell where this comic is going.
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:icongen-silverchicken:
Gen-SilverChicken Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
:icondinkleberg-plz: Foresight....
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:iconmattx125:
MattX125 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Student General Artist
In the words of the 11th Doctor.  "Don't tell me the rules!"
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:iconquinntus79:
Quinntus79 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
"A New Era of Steel." So Foresight is a Cyberpony version of Stalin? I always the cyberponies were kind of like communists.
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
Raven: I take it you've never watched Doctor Who, 'cause if you did, you'd know that in the show's revival, at the Cybermen's firs appearance, they used the phrase "The age of steel".
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:iconabandonedscarab:
AbandonedScarab Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
Foresight: "1v1 me, kid."
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TheArtistPony Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Use a massive regeneration to take them out!
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:icondoctorwholovesthe80s:
When the Doctor is glowing and says "I've got nothing to lose anymore..." HIDE FROM THE INETIVABLE EXPLOSIONS OF BADASS AWESOME!!!
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starfire6565 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013
i like part 1 because foresight asked if the doctor had feelings for derpy and he said no so foresight said to delet her but only to see his reaction and it was like he did have feelings for derpy. :)
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WorldWalker128 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
And then he turns into a Diamond Dog, and crushes his limbs between his teeth, realizes what he's done afterwards, and feels awful.

I've never seen the Doc be regenerated as anything other than a Pony in all the various fanfics and fanarts.
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:icontroybird:
troybird Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
nooooooooo man...he's going Sper Saiyan doctor mode xD 
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MissSindy Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013
oh Foresight *sniffle*
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:iconrosspitsharkhunter:
RossPitsharkhunter Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013
Actually you do, but we'll get to that another time!
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:iconenmar123:
Enmar123 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
sweet a fight :D
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:iconalexwarlorn:
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
IMHO, the Cyberponies are NOT being logical. They claim they've freed themselves of the bias of emotions, but they continue to show the emotions of arrogance, sadism, hubris, etc. If they were of pure of emotions as they claim to be, they would ACTUALLY be capable of being reasoned with!!! 
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AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
They are not arrogant or sadistic. They are just doing what they think is the best for all life in the universe. Face it, being an army of emotionless hive-minded cyborgs has many advantages. Of course, converting all life forms into cyborgs is amoral, but it makes perfect sense from the "survival of the fittest" point of view.
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Dr. X: This is not survival of the fittest. This is creating a new era for all lifeforms, an era without pain, grief, and rage.
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I meant "fittest" in a general sense, not necessarily physical fitness. Being unable to feel pain is an advantage, which makes you "fitter" than those who can feel it.
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Dr. X: Not always is in advantage. The use of physical pain is to inform your body of what endangers it and that you must abort your latest action at once.
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're absolutely right. But the Cybermen/Cyberponies don't realise it. ;)
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Dr. X: Of course not. They consider emotions themselves as a weakness, and that lead to ridding themselves of physical pain as well, which does not hinder them much.
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freelancerraiko Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
Her face looks so stoned in that one panel lol.
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MajorasWaker Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
Listened to 'The Doctor's Theme Series 4' while reading this, and it just made everything even more emotional.
Like many times before, thank you. Thank you for creating and sharing this with us.
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PortalDash Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
what is they run out of electricity
LoL
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:iconportaldash:
PortalDash Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"I've got nothing to lose"
This is the best doctor whooves/My little pony comic EVER!!! There are no problems of this comic. It even comes out very fast awaiting the rest!!!
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:iconsonicxrulesall:
sonicXrulesall Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013

me: ima drop my solar flare bomb!!!! zap !!!!

 

lyra : *dead*

 

me: but but but the fuk brain dead :P :P

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:iconesmeblaise:
esmeblaise Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
A new era of steel...? What?
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
REAL STEEL!
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:iconviabunny:
viabunny Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
more please
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:iconpannadonka:
PannaDonka Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE :D
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:iconkatdrawings:
katdrawings Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
IANT TO KNOW! W
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:iconantow87:
antow87 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
next please
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:iconzerosublighting:
zerosublighting Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
I NEED MOAR!!!!!
RAWRAWRAWRAWRAWRAWR D:<
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:iconanimators-voice:
Animators-Voice Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Must... Watch... To... Find out... Ending to... This... Epic... Comic...
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:icongary0ak:
Gary0ak Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
Cyberprince, he has a Sonicscrewdriver, are you sure you are going to win?
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1132002GABY Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm waiting for all the excitement :iconhappytwilightplz:
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:iconchaoko98:
chaoko98 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
I always had one plan, EMP
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BrinyCosplay Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
This might be to much to ask but are you thinking of making this into a comic book to sell at conventions or something? I read from chapter 1 to 11 and I must say I am really enjoying it (I even might start watching doctor who) I would like to own an actual book of this comic.. like i said it might be to much to ask of you planned on that
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fluffythehedgehog12 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I just read this from page one all the way to here! In ONE DAY!!! It's so addicting... I need more of this...
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LinBrightmoon Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist
Finally found this again after my connection died and lost it all. And now I'm on a cliffhanger. >.<

Exciting story so far though. I can't wait for more. (And learning exactly *how* Lyra learned of humans is going to be fun too.)
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crazyhammer Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
we miss this comic... it's time for dah next page no ?
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:iconphforever:
phforever Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I need moar >.< been following since the first couple of pages were out (in the very first chapter) and i love it >.<
:iconfluttershysadplz:
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:iconhitchhikerwaffle:
hitchhikerwaffle Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
When is the next part??????? I need my Doctor Whooves fix!
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:iconedowaado:
Edowaado Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Exams have kept me busy. I haven't even started on the next part < : )
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:iconhitchhikerwaffle:
hitchhikerwaffle Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
You are absolutely fine! School first absolutely! Good luck to you and you are an amazing artist!
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DemonBlud Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
wouldnt the fact that its summer (unless your in new zealand) mean more time for this fabulous comic?
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:iconyuurionna:
YuuriOnna Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013
New page plz :iconfluttershysadplz:
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XxSamanthaShyxX Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student Artist
Moarr please? :FluttershySadPlz:
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:iconxxsamanthashyxx:
XxSamanthaShyxX Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student Artist
I failed
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:iconwritersshadow:
WritersShadow Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
Yeah you failed.
:iconfluttershysadplz:
There is the "icon" in iconfluttershysadplz missing.
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:iconxxsamanthashyxx:
XxSamanthaShyxX Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Student Artist
Oh thanks for telling me~ :iconrainbowdashhappyplz:
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