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Doctor Whooves - Rebirth End by Edowaado Doctor Whooves - Rebirth End by Edowaado
A story ends the same way it began... with a wish. You better life a happy life with your daughter Derpy.

I do like how I got lots of comments of folks who were concerned with Foresight's well-being. Considering no one liked him in the beginning xD Also don't worry, those small pieces of the spaceship will all burn out before they even hit the ground.

Most of Foresight's monologue was actually written by a commenter I got on funnyjunk. I edited it only a slight bit, but it was so well done that I thought I couldn't let it go to waste. Hope you're reading this!

Gosh I'm tired but Wow what a ride! I bet you're wondering. Is this it? Is this really it? Yes, however. The main story is over. However! There will be an epilogue. It will only be a few parts, but we still can't leave this story until we find out what the deal is with Lyra and her knowledge of humans. Has all that happened here maybe have somekind of connection?

With that said thank you guys again a ton for the donations! I hope you guys enjoyed this story!

See you at the epilogue!
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Part 12: -You Are Here-

Epilogue
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Foresight - I'm not your Hero - Comic Backstory
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:icondaemonhaelldaeth:
Considering this page alone, actually first off has it been a full on journey.
Now for the page it is fantastic. A great end to a new beginning for this series. The idea of having a re-telling of how it all started shifted into the end is perfect. I also adore Foresight's monologue, really does justice to the Doctor I do not know of. Also appreciate the simple symbols of the tarot cards, but you should know there is much more to them than meets the eye, death is one that this show alone is reflected upon. Anyways, good show!
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well then, i might as well write something

first VISION! now as always i think that the page generally looks brilliant. but lets be hard here and then see if others think im fair. the first thing is that when the debris is starting to get pulled into the planets gravity well and starts to burn in the second pic of the three i can't help but to notice that the last one seems to be out of sync with the others. might just be me but shouldn't that one be first? im saying this because it looks like it's the least on fire of the three.

moving on, the last thing i felt with the vision is that it took me a minute to understand that the picture of derpy in mailmare uniform seeing a shooting star was a flashback of when she saw the doctor come to equestria for the first time. while there is nothing wrong with it per se you might want to make some kind of indication that it is a flashback, maybe some mist arond the frame or something like that, im just throwing suggestions.

all in all though? vision is a clear 4/5 (for me) and that is only if the first one was misplaced otherwise a 4,5/5.

now, originality.

hmmm... 4/5 NEXT!!

just kidding, about the next part at least. well i can surely say that this shit right here is about as original as you can get from a doctor who crossover. doctor saves the day, the semi-antagonist decides on a clean slate and to help ponies with the powers he has. while this in itself might not sound original i deem that the execution of the concept is what makes this worthy of a round of applause. still, it IS a kind of classic end it still isn't entirely original that is needed for the 5/5

ONWARDS WITH *trumpets* TECHNIQUE!

again, not much needs to be said, the art you deliver is definitely first class considering what you are using. nothing more to see here folks, 5/5, move on.

now for the last part FEELS *cough* i mean impact.

im gonna say that this page had one hell of a impact on me. it creates that good kind of ache that tells you that while everything is a bit sad and down it's still gonna work out. the guy who had been cursed with a two-sided blade is inspired to take a second look on life. the companion is safe with her family and you top that off with a solid philosophical view of the loneliness of the traveler who is searching for a place to rest. brilliant, very much so.

5/5
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hannahcw Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014
Clapclap  Bravo :D Loved this comic, So much action 'v'
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brandonmp98 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Student General Artist
loved this whole story, got really into it. just brilliant, absolutely brilliant!
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chrismaticfool Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
Wow, this comic is wonderfully written. The ending is just perfecct.
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shay123654 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014
Can you make a continueation for this comic? PLEASE? like the new doctor is coming back to ponyville and derpy finds him and makes him remember his past life or something like that? PLEAAAASSSSEEEEEE!
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Rainbowstarspower Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014
make more please
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cwonadoonoo Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
OMG SHOCK. Bwaaaaaa! That was so great!!!!!!!
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segamarvel Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
Don't get me wrong I LOVED this story but... where the Hell were the almighty princesses during this time? Or the Elements of harmony?
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Derp-Puppy Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
or maybe they went on a vacation?! XD lol
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segamarvel Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014
Darn!.... Didn't think of that.
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StreamSecret Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
well, maybe they were all captured as well, and/or the princesses were trying to defend themselves and canterlot until the cyber ponies went away
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