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Doctor Whooves - New Skin END by Edowaado Doctor Whooves - New Skin END by Edowaado
That's right, Foresight's back in attempted 3D.
Sorry it took so long to end this chapter, and I fear the updates won't get any faster, seeing as my final exams are creeping by in less than a month and I really need my time to study.

But in any case, the story is soon comic to an end, I predict one more chapter (With more than 8 parts) and an epilogue.

In any case thank you all your patience and your readership, and stay tuned!
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:bulletgreen: Doctor Whooves

Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 4: [link]
Chapter 5: [link]
Chapter 6: [link]
Chapter 7: [link]
Chapter 8: [link]
Chapter 9: [link]
Chapter 10:
Part 1: [link]
Part 2: [link]
Part 3: [link]
Part 4: [link]
Part 5: [link]
Part 6: [link]
Part 7: [link]
Part 8: ~You are here~

Chapter 11: [link]
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:iconciceroniche:
A very good way to end a chapter. You have me very invested in the story. The characters are complex enough to know not everything is as it seems, and the Doctors struggle to set everything right is particularly inspiring. How everything just seems to be getting worse and worse, and now this. You have a knack for suspense writing. I've never really been much of a Doctor Who fan, but from what I have see you can portray the Doctor (David Tenant Version) fairly close to the character. I don't think he would be the kind to want to settle down with somepony, but this is a MLP crossover, so some artistic license is warranted. I'm looking forward to more of your strip. Keep up the good work, would you?
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Critique by 2SilentQs May 6, 2013, 6:39:30 PM
I started off this comic knowing next to nothing about Doctor Who. All I knew was that it was British and there was a big blue box. When I saw part one of this pony crossover, I gave the comic a shot.

I reached the most up-to-date point a few days ago, and I'm hooked. This comic has everything perfect about it for me: great characters, wonderful artwork, an intriguing storyline, and emotion. TONS of emotion. This series you've got going is fantastic and I urge you to keep doing just what you're doing. You've created an absolute masterpiece. I love it.
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Gen-SilverChicken Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
:icondinkleberg-plz: Foresight.....
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:iconbaka2niisan:
Baka2niisan Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
looks like the cyber prince is grinning, creepy
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:iconninjabrony817:
NinjaBrony817 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Student General Artist
:iconreactionplz:
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:iconhyuugahigure:
HyuugaHigure Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014
Two words: Oh dear…
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:iconrubicscubics:
RubicsCubics Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH I remember this!!!! I was reading it a year back!!!! So glad I saved it to my bookmarks!
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:iconprincessjulliet123:
princessjulliet123 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
shit
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:iconcatchyartz:
CatchyArtz Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
My thoughts exactly.
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:iconlordmep:
lordmep Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh dear.
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:iconwhisperofleafs:
Whisperofleafs Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Love this <3

But now that I have read most of it I actually get why he is the cyber prince, if you look back you understand why and it's hard to explain XD
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:iconbellak33:
bellak33 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
aww I was really wanting that guy to be dead for good
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:icondayling-ari:
Dayling-Ari Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That last panel looks sexy. :I
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:icondusknoir64:
dusknoir64 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
am I the only one who is thinking this is what would happen if metal sonic was a good guy?
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:iconheart-the-legend:
Heart-The-Legend Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So awesome
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:icondoctorwholovesthe80s:
Doctorwholovesthe80s Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh crap!
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:icongaybiez:
gaybiez Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dude I was like CYBER PRINNNCE! SO SWAAAAG!
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:iconmillisiana:
millisiana Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Last Panel is freaky! 
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:iconnightflyer22:
NightFlyer22 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Subject 5 has ben converted

Me: oh-oh...

<The Cyber Prince.</i>

Me: oh no...

*Looks the last pannel*

Me: ...

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SO AWSOME :iconrainbowdashchuuplz:


Dr Whooves: OH COME ON! :icondwhoovesohcomeonplz:
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:iconrosspitsharkhunter:
RossPitsharkhunter Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013
Will the Doctor be able to hold in his regeneration for much longer? Will they all become this weeks cyber-food? What do the Cyber Ponies mean all hail the Cyber Prince? Tune in next week to find out. Same Bat Hour, same Bat Comic.
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:iconstormcutie:
StormCutie Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Student Writer
Oh GOD
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:iconretro7:
Retro7 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013   General Artist
Well....this is bad.
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:icontallgrass:
tallgrass Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013
Wow, geez. I remember when you released the very first comic of this series. I found it again when you'd completed up to chapter two, and again just now. Looking at how much you've grown as an artist, this comic is like a crash course on the history of your artistic progression. It's cool, it really is. It's not just the characters and their ability to emote that you've gotten better at, but also backgrounds, energy and motion, and even paneling. It's great! I can't wait till you next release a chapter. Now, till then, keep doing good work.
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DragonriderSC Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
i really like the story of foresight its so interesting and dark. his thoughts are always fun to read 
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:iconbarryfrommars:
BarryFromMars Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Perhaps update some of the other links, Some of them in the last few chapters haven't been updated.
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SkrillexxFH Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"Chapter 11: [link]"

YYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYY!
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:iconfreelancerraiko:
freelancerraiko Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
Cyber Prince. All I can think of is Prince getting robot parts and trying to sing.
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:iconshonenjump4eva:
ShonenJump4eva Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
Cyber Prince. Because he came in third.
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:iconthewintercalling:
TheWinterCalling Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
NOOOOO FORESIGHT OoO
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:iconsir-croco:
Sir-Croco Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Student Artist
Well, no one had the "foresight" to predict this....
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:iconppgmakesmesmile:
PPGmakesmesmile Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Student General Artist
I love you-clicks chapter 11-
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:iconjetjk3:
JETJK3 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013
BUCK!!!
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:iconelirra:
Elirra Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013
:iconjeffthekillerplz: Jeff's smile much?
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:iconnintendokirby64:
NintendoKirby64 Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can see his skin...
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:iconozozo12345:
ozozo12345 Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Student Artist
is it okay if i can trace it
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:iconedowaado:
Edowaado Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sure knock yourself out
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:iconskrillexxfh:
SkrillexxFH Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nooo.. NOOOO.. OH FUCK.. :iconohfuckplz:
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:iconflickeringfilms:
FlickeringFilms Featured By Owner May 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
When the next page coming???
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:iconrdkinght:
RDkinght Featured By Owner May 21, 2013
Need moar Doctor...
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:iconphforever:
phforever Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I have this crazy idea,that Bon Bon wasn't fully converted,because she hels on to her memories of Lyra and The Doctor,and her friends.
Just thinking out loud though...
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Xsteenie Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
(/!\ Spoilers from Doctor Who)
Just like that Torchwood woman in the season 2 finale, whoever she was, who screamed "I did my duty for Queen and Country" as she was being converted, then proceeded to kill two other Cybermen while saying the same thing after she was converted. Yeah, I like that idea.
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:iconmikkillerib:
Mikkillerib Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ah yes, converted into a cyberman, resulting in having the same abilities as one, but still had full control of her mind and nerve system, so that she were a independent cyberman.
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Justawriter97 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
i only know one way which all the electronic beings might die (but with that, unfortunately, means the death of all ponies converted, if the this that keeps the alive in biological state is electronic.)
In Equestria there isn't the technology available to xcreate an E.M.P. bomb or device to fry the circuits of the ship and the beings.
But there is one thing which not everybody knows.
The sun itself.
If Celestia, if she can, forces the sun to make a solar eruption, that should "fry" all the electronic devices on its path.
If somepeople don't understand what i'm talking about. Look for this: "Carrington Solar event of 1859"
It was the biggest of it's kind.
But Celestia shall need more that that to "fry" the circuits".
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CMC--Scootaloo Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Interesting idea. :)
But I doubt that he had thought out this.
He said, that the main cast should play no role in this comic, and that this time, the background ponies should be the heroes.
And also, when this would happen the spaceship would fall down and destroys the whole Ponyville.
I think it will be blown up in some way, like the Doctor said.
I wonder what will happen with the other cyber ponies, that are not in the spaceship when it's exploding.
They will want revenge and are still a threat then, though.
And I also wonder if there is some way to make the converted ponies normal again.
But when I understood right how they will be converted exactly, I have no hope and they will stay as cyber ponies forever.
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:iconjustawriter97:
Justawriter97 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
Hey, can i ask you a favor, could you please tell me where the author got the cyber ponies idea please, so i can' undestand this matter better.

P.S.: the EMP waves from the sun should travel along the earth once the erpution has started, i think that's the reason of the aurora borealis on the souther parts of earth, during the event.
Only the cyberponies out of the plantet would be safe, in other place, or planet, safe from the eruption.
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CMC--Scootaloo Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't know it 100 % exactly, because I haven't watched this show (except one episode), but this is a MLP crossover comic with the british science-fiction television series "Doctor Who".
One of the enemies the doctor fights are the cybermen, a race that replaces it's organic parts with cyber parts, like it's mentioned in this comic.
So, the cyber ponies are simply the pony version of the cybermen.
Here's more to read about the cybermen if you are interested:

[link]
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tzimhothy Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
wow wow wow so amazing :o must say, always thought Iron Will was just a douchebag but your story changes everything! i used to think the mane 6 were amazing but this.. wow just wow! i know its nog fanwork but it just looks real and all YOU ARE AMAZIN MAN!! (or woman dont now your sex)
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gilgasmash Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
dang! need mooooreeeee... :LOL:
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:iconashyfur524:
ashyfur524 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
HOLY F*CKIN' WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA?!?!?!?!?!?!
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:iconcmc--scootaloo:
CMC--Scootaloo Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I found this comic today, because of a short comic from you, that was in one of the news on Equestria Daily, and read it spontaneously over almost the whole afternoon.
I was amazed by it and I have to say, this is the most epic fanwork to My little Pony: Friendship is Magic I have seen since I began to watching over the fanwork.
At the beginning of the comic it seems very much like one of these short "Human Lyra" joke comics, combined with Doctor Whooves.
But you turned it quick into an epic story that I never had expected!
Unless like many comics with Lyra, you portrayed her desire to be a human and her interest in humans in a really serious manner and gave her really a great story with that!
And you gave Iron Will a background story that really explains why he decided to become a motivational trainer, it's highly imaginable that this is his real past!
You made a secret agent out of Donut Joe, like in "MMMystery on the Friendship Express" and you even gave Doctor Whooves a story!
And you did this great, considering the fact, he's the real Doctor Who who cames to Equestria, turning into a pony there, not like a pony form of him that has the same Tardis and the same abilities by coincidence, like it's showed in most comics and stories, I guess.
I even don't know Doctor Who really, except for one episode, but you created this comic in a way I can imagine very good now, how the show is like.
Every single page of this comic is exciting and interesting, it gets never boring, also not before the cyber ponies start their invasion, because you showed the relations between Lyra, the Doctor and Derpy very great.
I can't wait to read the last chapter, to see how everything ends and how the last mysteries you brought up in the story turns out.

I just have one question:

What's with the CMC's in this setting?
I know, it seems that you have not planned to built them in, because they never showed up until now, even with the end on the horizon.
But they are my absolutely favourite ponies right after Derpy, so I just have to ask.
Have you something in mind for them?
What happened to them? Also turned into cyber ponies? :(
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:iconedowaado:
Edowaado Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey Nanami, glad you've enjoyed reading my story thus far ^^
Regarding your question to the CMC, I've written a journal about the main six and it also very well regards the CMC and other main cast characters. [link]
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:iconcmc--scootaloo:
CMC--Scootaloo Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, and I have you on my watch list now, of course! :D
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