Edowaado on DeviantArthttps://www.deviantart.com/edowaado/art/Doctor-Whooves-End-Game-Pt-8-End-351535187Edowaado

Deviation Actions

Edowaado's avatar

Doctor Whooves - End Game Pt 8 ''End''

By
Published:
53.7K Views

Description

I've been waiting so long to get to this very point! I hope you all enjoyed reading this chapter as much as I did making it.
I've decided to raise the bar with this comic, but to do that I need to become a better person. I want to become better at drawing, become better at english, write the story better than I have until now, go out and get some air with my rollerblades, and all while I still have to focus on the final semester for my school.

So I've decided to at least take a two weeks break to learn how to use photoshop which I've received recently, and train pony antomy and lineless backgrounds as well.


:bulletgreen: Doctor Whooves

Chapter 1: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Th…
Chapter 2: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Fr…
Chapter 3: fav.me/d50tqux
Chapter 4: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Ri…
Chapter 5: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Up…
Chapter 6: fav.me/d5eodb6
Chapter 7: fav.me/d5gxypf
Chapter 8: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Tw…

Chapter 9:
Part 1: fav.me/d5q7vd9
Part 2: fav.me/d5qeo79
Part 3: fav.me/d5qrozj
Part 4: fav.me/d5r9wh5
Part 5: fav.me/d5rm84p
Part 6: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/En…
Part 7: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/En…
Part 8: -You Are Here-

Chapter 10: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Ne…
Chapter 11: edowaado.deviantart.com/art/Re…
Image size
1100x13869px 2.34 MB
© 2013 - 2024 Edowaado
Comments439
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
tonsostuff's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I loved this. When the Doctor was saying how he was done running, I felt a chill run through me. And if the Doctor was to go out any way, I think he'd like to go out knowing he might've saved one pony. I also loved how Foresight's prediction played out in the end, though admittedly very different from how he originally imagined it.

The art was wonderfully done and compared to some of your earlier Doctor Whooves comments. There are still places where you could patch up, but overall it's a lot better than it originally was.

If there was anything I'd criticize about this comic in particular, it would be that just as the Doctor is making his speech and about to push Lyra in, the speech bubbles (particularly the one that said "but my time") confused me very slightly. It may just have been me, but I had to reread it twice to make sure I understood what you were saying.

Overall, most emotional comic strip yet, even besting Iron Will's departure (which depressed me quite a bit). I loved the memory of Derpy and her daughter.