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Doctor Whooves - End Game Pt 8 ''End'' by Edowaado Doctor Whooves - End Game Pt 8 ''End'' by Edowaado
I've been waiting so long to get to this very point! I hope you all enjoyed reading this chapter as much as I did making it.
I've decided to raise the bar with this comic, but to do that I need to become a better person. I want to become better at drawing, become better at english, write the story better than I have until now, go out and get some air with my rollerblades, and all while I still have to focus on the final semester for my school.

So I've decided to at least take a two weeks break to learn how to use photoshop which I've received recently, and train pony antomy and lineless backgrounds as well.

:bulletgreen: Doctor Whooves

Chapter 1:…
Chapter 2:…
Chapter 3:
Chapter 4:…
Chapter 5:…
Chapter 6:
Chapter 7:
Chapter 8:…

Chapter 9:
Part 1:
Part 2:
Part 3:
Part 4:
Part 5:
Part 6:…
Part 7:…
Part 8: -You Are Here-

Chapter 10:…
Chapter 11:…
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First let me say that you are an excellent artist with incredible stamina. I've followed others that put out half the amount of work you do and in twice the time. The sheer volume of art you produce is staggering by comparison. Not only for it's quality, but it's quantity as well.
I am a recent watcher and read through pretty much everything on a weekend and at the end of each chapter I grew more and more enthralled with the story and the characters you portrayed. You've captured the essence of both the 10th Doctor and MLP in a way that is not only creative, but doesn't break the rules of two VERY different worlds.
If I had any complaints it's that you have the occasional spelling error, but it's not uber distracting for me. All in all it's a great series and I look forward to seeing how Lyra and Doctor get out of this mess.
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I've been following you since the first chapter, and I can't imagine the amount of effort you put into this. The storyline has a very Doctor Who feel to it.

The only thing I'm not much of a fan of is the dialogue. There are parts in which it's obvious what you're trying to say... but things occasionally get lost in translation. If you could fix the run-on sentences, and avoid using more than two "and's" in a sentence, it would really help keep the reader in the story.

Perhaps you could get someone to help polish your transcripts. (I'd even volunteer) You're a great artist, and I love what you have done with the story. I just think you could improve on the character speech.
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DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Raven: HOLD ON. Didn't he say that the one in the second place will received the ultimate upgrade???
samsaragreen Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014
yes but hes not COMPATIBLE
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014
Raven: Well, they lied, so that doesn't matter.
TARDISpony101 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Student General Artist
i did NOT see that coming. i thought they would spare her or something.
serwalt Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014
their the Cybermen.... Or Ponies, they never spare anyone
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
For the Who fans who have watched most of the show, who didn't see this end coming?
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
Panel 18: meant to be "saved"
Persona22 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014
Wouldn't he regenerate into this pony?…
BrawnyStomp Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
if i tell you, it's going to be ruin
princessjulliet123 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
well... that sucks
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