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January 7, 2013
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Doctor Whooves - End Game Pt 3 by Edowaado Doctor Whooves - End Game Pt 3 by Edowaado
Still working on the lineartless backgrounds. This is a story a friend of mine once told me.

:bulletgreen: Doctor Whooves

Chapter 1:…
Chapter 2:…
Chapter 3:
Chapter 4:…
Chapter 5:…
Chapter 6:
Chapter 7:
Chapter 8:…

Chapter 9:
Part 1:
Part 2:
Part 3: -You Are Here-
Part 4:
Part 5:
Part 6:…
Part 7:…
Part 8:…

Chapter 10:…
Chapter 11:…
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This is a very far way to come for an artist like you, I believe, and I think that a person like you should deserve more attention for all the effort you have amassed into this comic, with your art improving every step of the way taken.

I am going to proceed to critiquing this specific strip:

You have done a fairly good job with the shading on a few panels, and it is a very nice additional small detail added to "polish up" this comic. I thought that you could perhaps change the way that Foresight was positions or the way his expression changes.

Now for overall critique on wholesale comic:

The story telling is so profound and can impact the reader in such a way that, possibly, even a person unfamiliar with Dr. Who can follow and understand everything, and develop a subconscious relationship with the characters in this story: a sign of a special literate talent.

Despite the huge improvement that your artwork underwent this whole time, i think you still need a few extra step before i can call you a fully mastered artist.

Few people can go such ways to do what you have accomplished today, and you have to be proud of what you did. Disregard any undermining comment made to you on your efforts, remember that you have a storytelling knack that few can muster well enough to create an elaborate and memorable story.

Keep on going, and don't stop no matter what.
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1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
Same thing in Kung-Fu Panda, both movies. Someone tries to stop the future they don't like, which causes events to lead to what they were trying to prevent.
princessjulliet123 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
who needs sleep? HA! thank you for scaring the crap out of me -_-
Aveangeladarkangel Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well I didn't want to sleep tonight anyway
helios485 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
wow, that grim reaper at the last panel looks a lot more like Black Feather of Shadow Abyss.…
ArmoredAlienArtist Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
by far my favorite page so far :D
TakeruDavis Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, classic story of self-fulfilled prophecy
HyuugaHigure Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014
99fluffball Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow... I love Foresight to death but... now he's creeping me out >w< I neeeeeed to draw him.

I've heard of this story too. *shudders*

Foresight reminds me of a few Yu-Gi-Oh! villains. The way he keeps going on about destiny, the way he is arrogantly talking to the Doctor and not going to stop yammering anytime soon.

DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Raven: That was just one guy.
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